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#76 Post by SinaAzad »

King-sama wrote: Wed Jul 11, 2018 1:38 pm I like the colors in the doll one. (: Her body language indicates to me that she is defeated + hopeless.
Oh damn never noticed anyone posting here -_- I should check here more often... sorry about that. honestly that last work... it kinda pains me look at it haha I was too lazy to fix some parts and there are a number of mistakes I can easily point out, hope I do a better job next time, but thanks for the support!

in the meantime, I'm gonna upload my last work... I rather upload my colored works so there are a number of sketches that are never gonna make it on this page.

I tried to experiment with this work as well... when for a bright background...
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#77 Post by Zelan »

I like the bright background! It makes the whole piece pop, and lets the darker subject stand out, and it's not eye-searing.

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Zelan wrote: Thu Aug 16, 2018 12:22 pm I like the bright background! It makes the whole piece pop and lets the darker subject stand out, and it's not eye-searing.
Oh, I'm glad I check the forums faster this time lol, well hearing that in encouraging, I'm not sure if that's usable for Visual novels tho, would make a decent Main Menu art I guess? Or at least I hope!
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SinaAzad wrote: Sun Aug 19, 2018 3:39 am
Zelan wrote: Thu Aug 16, 2018 12:22 pm I like the bright background! It makes the whole piece pop and lets the darker subject stand out, and it's not eye-searing.
Oh, I'm glad I check the forums faster this time lol, well hearing that in encouraging, I'm not sure if that's usable for Visual novels tho, would make a decent Main Menu art I guess? Or at least I hope!
It would be great Main Menu art, and it could also work well for promotional art or promo art. Not all games have those, especially if they're smaller, but a style like this would work if you do decide to go that route. c:

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#80 Post by SinaAzad »

finished this a while ago, don't think I will ever color it.
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a little bit of study tried to use fewer layers and work without lineart!
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and Back to line art again lol
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#83 Post by SinaAzad »

Just tried drawing a friend of mine! this one did not take that long to draw!
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Another work that I'm not sure what to do with... should I stop? should I colour it? for now, I will call it a WiP and see how it goes!
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Update from the previous post! now it is in colour! not that happy with it tho, didn't even bother to clean it up!
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#86 Post by SinaAzad »

well, I'm not happy with my recent works...
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#87 Post by SinaAzad »

another work done, I guess I'm kinda happy with this one in general (but some problems are still there -_-) loli ftw!
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#88 Post by SinaAzad »

the last drawing I've done, again, I'm kinda happy with it and at the same time forcing my self to ignore some problems, u see actually when I work on a drawing for a long time ( as in days not hours ) I just kinda want to finish it!
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#89 Post by SinaAzad »

hmmm I've been playing around with csp recently, I'm starting to enjoy sketching more than drawing for real!
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#90 Post by SinaAzad »

Oh well... it's been a while, the improvement is so freaking slow as I'm not drawing that much ... 1 work per month is my normal pace!
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