Character designs thoughts?
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Character designs thoughts?
I'm working on my first (fantasy) visual novel, Shadowed Hearts, and I'm starting to slowly work on drawing my characters. Lucia is the main character and I just sketched her out. Was wondering if it looks good so far. Any comment is appreciated and I will also post more sketches when done.
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Re: Character designs thoughts?
It seems pretty competent to me. The whole scar over one eye thing is the only thing that stands out to me as a somewhat cliched character design trait.
Watch out with the name, you will get a lot of people confusing your game for Shadow Hearts, a well known series of RPGs if you were a gamer back in the PS2 era.
Watch out with the name, you will get a lot of people confusing your game for Shadow Hearts, a well known series of RPGs if you were a gamer back in the PS2 era.
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Re: Character designs thoughts?
Yeah, I see what you man by that haha. Thank you for your input!SundownKid wrote:It seems pretty competent to me. The whole scar over one eye thing is the only thing that stands out to me as a somewhat cliched character design trait.
Watch out with the name, you will get a lot of people confusing your game for Shadow Hearts, a well known series of RPGs if you were a gamer back in the PS2 era.
And wow, I had never heard of that game before. ^^; I'll keep that fact in mind.
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Re: Character designs thoughts?
It's actually a popular series that includes 3 games. It was the first thing I thought of when I read your game title as well. And I think your character design is distinct, but it does superficially resemble one of the main characters from the Shadow Hearts 2 game.Rhea07 wrote: And wow, I had never heard of that game before. ^^; I'll keep that fact in mind.
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Re: Character designs thoughts?
Oh wow, can't believe I haven't heard of the game before. I'll certainly reconsider the name, but for now, I'll just leave it as it is. ^^LateWhiteRabbit wrote: ↑Thu Jun 29, 2017 5:43 pmIt's actually a popular series that includes 3 games. It was the first thing I thought of when I read your game title as well. And I think your character design is distinct, but it does superficially resemble one of the main characters from the Shadow Hearts 2 game.Rhea07 wrote: And wow, I had never heard of that game before. ^^; I'll keep that fact in mind.
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Re: Character designs thoughts?
She looks cool! I love the design, it's very fantasy as well which is awesome
Hmm, as for advice, she has metal armour on her legs? It might be worth adding some metal armour to her arms/somewhere above the waist, to bring things together ^^
Hmm, as for advice, she has metal armour on her legs? It might be worth adding some metal armour to her arms/somewhere above the waist, to bring things together ^^
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