Character designs thoughts?

[Rhea07]

I'm working on my first (fantasy) visual novel, Shadowed Hearts, and I'm starting to slowly work on drawing my characters. Lucia is the main character and I just sketched her out. Was wondering if it looks good so far. Any comment is appreciated and I will also post more sketches when done.

[SundownKid]

It seems pretty competent to me. The whole scar over one eye thing is the only thing that stands out to me as a somewhat cliched character design trait.

Watch out with the name, you will get a lot of people confusing your game for Shadow Hearts, a well known series of RPGs if you were a gamer back in the PS2 era.

[Rhea07]

It seems pretty competent to me. The whole scar over one eye thing is the only thing that stands out to me as a somewhat cliched character design trait.

Watch out with the name, you will get a lot of people confusing your game for Shadow Hearts, a well known series of RPGs if you were a gamer back in the PS2 era.

Yeah, I see what you man by that haha. Thank you for your input!

And wow, I had never heard of that game before. ^^; I'll keep that fact in mind.

[LateWhiteRabbit]

And wow, I had never heard of that game before. ^^; I'll keep that fact in mind.

It's actually a popular series that includes 3 games. It was the first thing I thought of when I read your game title as well. And I think your character design is distinct, but it does superficially resemble one of the main characters from the Shadow Hearts 2 game.

[Rhea07]

And wow, I had never heard of that game before. ^^; I'll keep that fact in mind.

It's actually a popular series that includes 3 games. It was the first thing I thought of when I read your game title as well. And I think your character design is distinct, but it does superficially resemble one of the main characters from the Shadow Hearts 2 game.

Oh wow, can't believe I haven't heard of the game before. I'll certainly reconsider the name, but for now, I'll just leave it as it is. ^^

[Nekonomicon]

She looks cool! I love the design, it's very fantasy as well which is awesome
Hmm, as for advice, she has metal armour on her legs? It might be worth adding some metal armour to her arms/somewhere above the waist, to bring things together ^^