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Would like to get feedback on our VN art.

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Hey guys,

My artist friend and I are making a game based off of Kim Possible.
we just finished 2 sprites and a background and are looking for feedback.

http://i.imgur.com/Rm3mvut.png

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#2 Post by Dramatological »

I like the background. The faces are nice. The nipple thing is a bit distracting, but I'm guessing I'm not the target demographic.

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#3 Post by PencilSlothCreations »

Would it be alright if I give some detailed constructive criticism? Or would you also like some redlining done? I just don't want to come off as too harsh~

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PencilSlothCreations wrote:Would it be alright if I give some detailed constructive criticism? Or would you also like some redlining done? I just don't want to come off as too harsh~
By all means go right ahead.

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#5 Post by Ben Ayoo »

Kim Possible is supposed to be girl? The broad shoulders make her look manly. Strong nipple presence on a man's body looks not good.
I like the other girl face and in general she looks like the best part of the whole picture. Her design looks stable. She has an actual neck that supports her head size unlike Kim's. Her wrist looks okay while Kim's looks like it has being crushed.

For the background, it looks like you copy pasted the thick tree all over. Try to add variety like some thin trunk trees.
Also it would mprove the background if the aduience could see just a hint of the the things written in the bulletin board.

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#6 Post by Taleweaver »

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