my first game ( you dont have to come see this)

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my first game ( you dont have to come see this)

#1 Post by Alexkittycat » Mon Feb 26, 2018 9:43 am

This is a danganronpa fan game i am working on called "monster talent killers",but to be able to put the sprites in the game ,i need to post them here, so **(SPOILER ALERT ON THE CHARACTERS) Any and all constructive criticism is welcomed :D
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Re: my first game ( you dont have to come see this)

#2 Post by frylander » Sat Mar 03, 2018 1:03 pm

Honestly they look pretty good, the colored lineart makes the lines not stand out more than they should, and you seem to have lots of sprite variations.

Maybe try to have more different poses on the sprites since some of them look very similar and are always facing the left, and that may come as unrealistic or forced.

Other than that, keep up the good work!

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