Sirenn's Art - opinions needed

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Sirenn's Art - opinions needed

#1 Post by Sirenn_ » Tue Mar 20, 2018 3:47 pm

Hello! ^^

I am not a professional artist in any way, I draw as a hobby.
Now that I used my excuses,.. I would like to make a visual novel and started drawing some characters.
Please tell me if you'd like to play a game with characters like these:

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Feedback is really appreciated!

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Re: Sirenn's Art - opinions needed

#2 Post by GrammaHobbes » Wed Mar 21, 2018 4:29 am

I certainly would play with these characters. However I do have to point out one thing, the gap in the girls legs, you should fill it in, it looks a bit strange. Other than that I like the characters and colors!

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Re: Sirenn's Art - opinions needed

#3 Post by Sirenn_ » Thu Mar 22, 2018 12:02 pm

GrammaHobbes wrote:
Wed Mar 21, 2018 4:29 am
I certainly would play with these characters. However I do have to point out one thing, the gap in the girls legs, you should fill it in, it looks a bit strange. Other than that I like the characters and colors!
Yay! That's great! ^^ Now that you pointed it out, I agree with you, I will get to work on that. Thank you for the critique!

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