KLaruga's art //critiques and feedback wanted.

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KLaruga's art //critiques and feedback wanted.

#1 Post by alberte » Fri Apr 20, 2018 12:31 pm

Hello!
Thought I'd post my drawings here.
This is my most recent drawing, Kizuna Ai.
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Hope someone can give me feedback on my sprites because I never made sprites before.
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Oh and my name I go by for drawing is Klaruga to clear any confusion w/ my username ^^

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Re: KLaruga's art //critiques and feedback wanted.

#2 Post by Ermytarya » Fri Apr 20, 2018 2:56 pm

So you requested critique hope you can take it to improve and no getting angry at me, lol i just want to help.

-I looked at your profile you are 23 arent you? at your age you should know about structuring before drawning because your character look like they lack of a proper skeleton.

-You need to work in anatomy, there is a huge flaw there, just browse the internet for pictures of real people to use as reference or look at the davinci proportions thats really usefull(you that stuff of the heads in a body) to keep anatomy ok, am not saying it has too look perfect!! every artist has some flaw in anatomy even the pros. just work enough to make it look ok.Image

--Here is quick search in Deviantart gives you :
https://www.deviantart.com/art/Anatomy- ... l-27484310
The anatomy is still i little off in the tutorial, but is so you get the idea what am talking about.
-Here is another:
https://www.deviantart.com/art/Anatomy- ... -409577018
disclaimer: i dont own the tutorials i just did a quick search in DA.

-The coloring is ok.

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Re: KLaruga's art //critiques and feedback wanted.

#3 Post by alberte » Fri Apr 20, 2018 4:17 pm

Ermytarya wrote:
Fri Apr 20, 2018 2:56 pm
So you requested critique hope you can take it to improve and no getting angry at me, lol i just want to help.

-I looked at your profile you are 23 arent you? at your age you should know about structuring before drawning because your character look like they lack of a proper skeleton.

-You need to work in anatomy, there is a huge flaw there, just browse the internet for pictures of real people to use as reference or look at the davinci proportions thats really usefull(you that stuff of the heads in a body) to keep anatomy ok, am not saying it has too look perfect!! every artist has some flaw in anatomy even the pros. just work enough to make it look ok.Image

--Here is quick search in Deviantart gives you :
https://www.deviantart.com/art/Anatomy- ... l-27484310
The anatomy is still i little off in the tutorial, but is so you get the idea what am talking about.
-Here is another:
https://www.deviantart.com/art/Anatomy- ... -409577018
disclaimer: i dont own the tutorials i just did a quick search in DA.

-The coloring is ok.

Thanks for the advice, I guess I've been absent minded you can say and stubborn about trying to learn anatomy by myself i'll use more reference and I read through that tutorial.
I'll try the drawing the heads first thing and try to redraw them more freely.

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I sketched this ... hope its somewhat better =/

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Re: KLaruga's art //critiques and feedback wanted.

#4 Post by Ermytarya » Fri Apr 20, 2018 10:30 pm

alberte wrote:
Fri Apr 20, 2018 4:17 pm




Thanks for the advice, I guess I've been absent minded you can say and stubborn about trying to learn anatomy by myself i'll use more reference and I read through that tutorial.
I'll try the drawing the heads first thing and try to redraw them more freely.

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I sketched this ... hope its somewhat better =/
Just keep practicing and you will get better!!
Just browse in deviantart "draw this again" and you'll see how other people have improved! because they keep practicing! if you keep drawning you will improve eventuallyImage It looks a little better then the others!

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Re: KLaruga's art //critiques and feedback wanted.

#5 Post by alberte » Mon May 07, 2018 11:05 am

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A lineart I did.

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