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This is what I have so far of a sprite I'm working on for practice. There are some semi-unfinished areas. I'm struggling with the linework on the coat. I don't like the color of the lines being lighter than the coat color, and I'm wondering if using a darker color line on the clothes will improve it. I think the light brown lines work better for the skin.



Lemme know your thoughts. Thanks!

EDIT: To be clear, I'm open to critique. I'm trying to improve.

I've been working on this guy, and thought I would share.

I've been up to more art shenanigans. I'm trying out the webcomic thing, and I created this cover for my work.

If you're curious, the webcomic is here: https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/g ... _no=209043