Is my main menu art good enough?
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2018 7:47 pm
So, I am doing a visual novel written by me and someone else, but without counting my friend, there is no one else helping on the project. So, that means we have to do everything by ourselves, including the art, and none of us are perfect in this area.
But, I do know how to draw things using a "base". So, I decided to make the backgrounds of the VN, while my friend would do the characters sprites. I took photos of environments that are similar to how I picture the locations of the story, and made a lineart of one of them (which is supposed to be the main menu's background) in Photoshop. Later I put on some textures, added lightning, added some new things, and such.
You can see the original photo here: http://prntscr.com/kv6cpx , the lineart before adding the last few elements to it here: http://prntscr.com/kv6cwx , and the final art here: http://prntscr.com/kv6da6 , just for the sake of comparisons.
While I definitely do not see it as "bad" and actually quite "good", I still feel a little bit "disappointed" with the final art. It doesn't feel "natural" to me, and I don't know if people would find it "good" or "eye-catching". So, I want to know your opinion: Does it look good? What else can I improve in the next BGs I draw?
But, I do know how to draw things using a "base". So, I decided to make the backgrounds of the VN, while my friend would do the characters sprites. I took photos of environments that are similar to how I picture the locations of the story, and made a lineart of one of them (which is supposed to be the main menu's background) in Photoshop. Later I put on some textures, added lightning, added some new things, and such.
You can see the original photo here: http://prntscr.com/kv6cpx , the lineart before adding the last few elements to it here: http://prntscr.com/kv6cwx , and the final art here: http://prntscr.com/kv6da6 , just for the sake of comparisons.
While I definitely do not see it as "bad" and actually quite "good", I still feel a little bit "disappointed" with the final art. It doesn't feel "natural" to me, and I don't know if people would find it "good" or "eye-catching". So, I want to know your opinion: Does it look good? What else can I improve in the next BGs I draw?