Yuuki's Art Journey [Feedback Appreciated!]

[YuukiCrossPudding]

Yeah congrats don't forget to post some of your tablet pictures. if you can.

Sure, I will! But while handling the project of mine, I think I can't draw for these times.
I hope I could finish my writing soon, so I can try draw with the tablet.

[YuukiCrossPudding]

I draw the girl, but the boxes is not mine.
it's kind of character for Deviantart.
for dothack the world group~

[Lumen_Astrum]

Nice drawing there. I love your style, but I think you should work on your anatomy. The arm is a bit too short (the whole arm should end before the knee) and the way you draw the hands (It looks a bit off). Aside from that, good job. ^^

[YuukiCrossPudding]

Nice drawing there. I love your style, but I think you should work on your anatomy. The arm is a bit too short (the whole arm should end before the knee) and the way you draw the hands (It looks a bit off). Aside from that, good job. ^^

Hyaa , drawing hands and the feet is my biggest weakness >.<
Usually I draw the arm too long (now it's too short!)
I'll try to do my best in learning how to draw hands more!
Thanks~ ^^

[YuukiCrossPudding]

Another one!!!
Critics again please~

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[YuukiCrossPudding]

just random sketch

[YuukiCrossPudding]

messy!!

[YuukiCrossPudding]

Another one~
I'm in good mood today for drawing~

[SusanTheCat]

I really like this last one.

Susan

[YuukiCrossPudding]

@susan : thanks! I hope I can do better next time!

[Julie]

Cute!

[YuukiCrossPudding]

@julie: thanks!

[YuukiCrossPudding]

I made that one for my VN sprite. But it's bad, so I fix it.
Into this:

This is the sprite for my VN project, how about it?
Please give some advice or critics^^
Maybe I can fix it more etc?
Thanks

[Verity]

I think it might help if you slope the shoulders a little bit—generally they're not so much straight across, I think, and that'd make the poses look more natural. You could also move the eyes a little closer together—I think the rule of thumb might be one eye-width between them. That and I think generally male body types have a bit less hip to them. You're doing pretty good now, though.

Oh! One more thing I thought of—the drapery on the clothing looks a bit odd, I think because it's sort of sloping up whereas it should probably be curving down because of gravity. But really, it's improved a lot. I particularly like the hand, actually, which is pretty good because hands can be really hard.

[YuukiCrossPudding]

I think it might help if you slope the shoulders a little bit—generally they're not so much straight across, I think, and that'd make the poses look more natural. You could also move the eyes a little closer together—I think the rule of thumb might be one eye-width between them. That and I think generally male body types have a bit less hip to them. You're doing pretty good now, though.

Oh! One more thing I thought of—the drapery on the clothing looks a bit odd, I think because it's sort of sloping up whereas it should probably be curving down because of gravity. But really, it's improved a lot. I particularly like the hand, actually, which is pretty good because hands can be really hard.

Thanks~
I'll try to fix the places that you said~