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Re: My drawing and coloring, Crtic please!

#61 Post by YonYonYon » Sat Mar 05, 2011 4:13 am

Ok... Here I am.
First, anatomy. Lotus lined it already, but i did it again .___. I picked a girl though
About folds and shading - I'll show 'em later.
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Re: My drawing and coloring, Crtic please!

#62 Post by YonYonYon » Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:49 am

Sorreh my English. Sorry for redrawing of your character .__.
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Re: My drawing and coloring, Crtic please!

#63 Post by YuukiCrossPudding » Sat Mar 05, 2011 11:04 am

@yonyonyon: OwO
Waaaaa~!! :3
Love you so much!
These was a great advices! Sometimes there's something odd with my drawing but I just can't see neither fix it xD
I'll try to make understructure from now on (hope it'll be better!)
and that one about the light source too!
haha, I laugh when I saw the anatomy one! I hope I didn't make the same mistakes >_< (although I think I'll probably do that>.>)
Thank you so much for making all this and waste your precious time >A<
I'll download this file and keep it as a reminder when I draw is it okay??
and it's not a problem to redraw my character! :)

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Re: My drawing and coloring, Crtic please!

#64 Post by YuukiCrossPudding » Fri Mar 11, 2011 6:30 am

Mikuo Hatsune <33
Hm.. I just realized my sprite for turnip in love is bad D:
I think to redo the body. Is like this alright? (I'll try to make the size based on mikuo that I draw)
Well how do you think about him?
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#65 Post by YuukiCrossPudding » Sat May 21, 2011 9:26 am

;A; well haven't check this forum for a long time XP
*A* I am struggling with my school, sometimes I think I should just move from that school
Well kinda still working for some VN project I'm in, also I hope my own VN project still progressing too (haven't check mine for a long time and some ppl just..*poof!*)...why I'm blabbing that here?

ah, btw I still learn how to color, and draw,,
=3= not really much progress huh? ;A;
That's the blank one, I have him in some odd red background on my DA
but I think I need advices and that odd red BG just make things harder to see? xD
Thank you! and adios! I'll go on a little hiatus again...not really hiatus since I'll still working on my project!
and checking this too maybe on weekend
*POOF!*
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Re: My drawing and coloring, Crtic please!

#66 Post by smileforthespies » Sat May 21, 2011 10:19 am

Gah, he's so cuuute!
<3

Anyways, my main critique here would be that his eyes are too far apart, as well as being uneven. Infact, I think his entire face would benefit from some careful proportionning.

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As you see in the above image, the eyes are the width of one eye apart.

Also, although this is mostly a matter of personal preference, I think his face is too angular. Especially around the jaw.

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#67 Post by YuukiCrossPudding » Tue Jun 21, 2011 3:17 pm

@smile yeah that's always become my one big problem lol
I forgot the distance of the eyes >A<

Ah and it's not much but I...quick sketch(?) and colored some pic of Len Kagamine (Vocaloid)
It took 10-15 min for the rabbit ear one (it's a thanks gift coz someone liked my ugly drawing lolol)
15-25 for the blue hood one
and maybe 25 or 30 min for the one with kaito doll

>A< it's is messy I know ;A;
just for fun lol since I need to draw many things but I'm not in the mood for it
So I draw Len <3
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#68 Post by Fawn » Wed Jun 22, 2011 4:35 am

Lotsa advice:
If you're using the burn and dodge tool- Stop! It is not good for your art!

Don't use soft brushes for shading until you are adding final touches like reflections and blush. Use hard brushes to block out the main shadows according to the shape that you're shading- try not to draw shadows and highlights as thin round lines, they often aren't, especially in anime style.

For hair, use hard brushes with pen pressure on. Shade the basic shapes of the shadows then add the smaller details like loose hairs. Use a very light version of the original hair color to add highlights. Try not to blur hair shading, hair looks best when it's sharper.

As for your lines, maybe try using colors instead of straight black. Dark brown, Dark red and sometimes dark blue look best.
If you can get your hands on this book, you won't be dissapointed: http://www.amazon.com/How-Draw-Manga-42 ... 4766117816 it's rare but it will help a lot :) Have fun drawing!

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Re: My drawing and coloring, Crtic please!

#69 Post by YuukiCrossPudding » Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:42 am

@fawn Thank you for the advices! I didn't use burn or dodge tool.. (what is that? lol xD)
but using brush and watercolor
alsckndlsacl I hope I can do better ;A;
I really stubborn, everytime I color something, I just end up using my old style again == orz

Also for sprite (one of my project)
I always end up redoing it. and I hope this will be my final == so tired hiks
is it any better? or worse?! OAO
is my style okay?? or maybe even worse than before? xD

in this image from left (the first one, and the other one colored by joey) from oldest until the newest
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Thanks in advance /o/

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#70 Post by YuukiCrossPudding » Mon Oct 10, 2011 11:21 am

OAO wow long time... without any update from me lolol xDD
okay~ I'm only passing by so you ppl will not forget me LOL -shot-

huff random sketch
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and quick draw also color for my sis birthday lolol
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#71 Post by TsukiShima » Mon Oct 10, 2011 11:49 am

Your arts improved so much from your first post, I love seeing how others improve time by time, and sometimes even get jealous.

Of course, to learn, I usually dig up some tutorial. But I found it hard to really understand some of them and I couldn't get it. I found that watching others doing it is much easier for me to learn, and as time past, I got my own style too ( a little, I'm still experimenting now too )

I believe this maybe can help you: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PduZVq2YLYs You are using SAI right?
Here's a more complex one xD http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5f_OgkfnkKE

I shall admit that I like your style too, keep it up Yuuki-chan~

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#72 Post by YuukiCrossPudding » Sat Oct 29, 2011 1:12 pm

;A; aaaaaaa thank you so much!
and also for the vids! I'll try to learn more! \>A</
lol you can do it too!!
I'm jealous with other ppl too you know! like.. omg she just one year older than me but her skills are OMG
xD I think that's normal, because if we see them and motivated, it's a positive thing.. right? *A*

and just drop by again lol after a long hiatus from drawing.. ._. I think almost 1 month or so..
(the last time I draw.. that pic for my sis is.. 28th September...hiks)
ARTBLOOCKK I HATE YOU! and I hate myself xDD

ahh changed how I color again ._.
=3= I don't know for this style... uh..
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Re: My drawing and coloring, Crtic please!

#73 Post by MonoPiero » Sat Oct 29, 2011 1:42 pm

YuukiCrossPudding wrote:;A; aaaaaaa thank you so much!
and also for the vids! I'll try to learn more! \>A</
lol you can do it too!!
I'm jealous with other ppl too you know! like.. omg she just one year older than me but her skills are OMG
xD I think that's normal, because if we see them and motivated, it's a positive thing.. right? *A*

and just drop by again lol after a long hiatus from drawing.. ._. I think almost 1 month or so..
(the last time I draw.. that pic for my sis is.. 28th September...hiks)
ARTBLOOCKK I HATE YOU! and I hate myself xDD

ahh changed how I color again ._.
=3= I don't know for this style... uh..
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1 year is big difference lol(even my 5months before and after looks scary) I get jealous at like.. Everyone T_T. Yeah, it motivates you alot xD. Just sketch if you have artblock ^_^

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#74 Post by JustAnotherMe » Sat Oct 29, 2011 4:46 pm

LEN!!!!
You are bigger than what you think but smaller than you can imagine.
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#75 Post by poppyrocks » Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:29 am

omg your drawings have improved so much!!!!!


IM JELLY!!! >=D

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