Seeking Idea Bumpers for Reach for the Stars(GxG)

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Seeking Idea Bumpers for Reach for the Stars(GxG)

#1 Post by infel » Sat May 16, 2015 5:04 pm

Hi, I've decided to do this early and am in need of a idea bumpers for my game Reach for the Stars. It's a GxG game and is a slice of life story that follows Akane Hashira who returns to her hometown after a tragic accident. There she meets both new and old faces and gains new friends while slowly learning to accept herself for who she is. As she does though dark secrets will come out about her friends and she'll learn that nothing in life is simple.

So yeah I know this is kind of generic idea right now but trust me the story is interesting, least I hope so :oops: . It focuses on friendship, lesbian relationships, death, and self acceptance. I already have a short prologue finished and part of the first chapter. Outlining for the second chapter is done and am soon going to outline the third.

What I need are people who are friendly, give honest advice, and are helpful. This game may be simple but I want it to be a fun play for others. It's set to be a free game and a collaboration, so if you're interested at all please PM me =).

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#2 Post by Taleweaver » Sun May 17, 2015 3:59 am

So, essentially, you're looking for a team of idea bumpers?
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#3 Post by infel » Thu May 21, 2015 3:07 pm

Taleweaver wrote:So, essentially, you're looking for a team of idea bumpers?

Oh no. Proofreading. I just want to make sure the writing, characters, and story are good and people enjoy them.
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Re: Seeking Proofreaders for Reach for the Stars(GxG)

#4 Post by Laiska » Thu May 21, 2015 4:38 pm

infel wrote:Oh no. Proofreading. I just want to make sure the writing, characters, and story are good and people enjoy them.
Proofreading refers to checking the actual writing of a script for errors, such as misspellings or grammatical errors.

What you're looking for is just someone who gives you feedback. An idea bumper is usually someone who you can toss around ideas with for the story while you're planning. You're looking for something more along those lines, or some sort of evaluator, not a proofreader.

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Re: Seeking Proofreaders for Reach for the Stars(GxG)

#5 Post by infel » Sat May 23, 2015 2:11 am

Laiska wrote:
infel wrote:Oh no. Proofreading. I just want to make sure the writing, characters, and story are good and people enjoy them.
Proofreading refers to checking the actual writing of a script for errors, such as misspellings or grammatical errors.

What you're looking for is just someone who gives you feedback. An idea bumper is usually someone who you can toss around ideas with for the story while you're planning. You're looking for something more along those lines, or some sort of evaluator, not a proofreader.

Oh okay. Thank you for telling me DX. So sorry Taleweaver for me getting confused. I'll change the title. Thank you both.
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Re: Seeking Idea Bumpers for Reach for the Stars(GxG)

#6 Post by ColaCat » Sat May 23, 2015 7:38 am

I'd be more than happy to help. ^_^
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Re: Seeking Idea Bumpers for Reach for the Stars(GxG)

#7 Post by Naustix » Sat May 23, 2015 12:26 pm

I'll lend my sword and be of assistance if I can~

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Re: Seeking Idea Bumpers for Reach for the Stars(GxG)

#8 Post by GreyWolfXx » Sat Jun 06, 2015 12:08 pm

I'd be happy to help too :)

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