~Romance,Comedy otome game~logo,Proofreading and CG's(BG's?)

[nanna4673]

Hello here!

Before I begin talking: Hi! My name is Nanna and I am also known on the internet as Nanna4673(youtube and here), Kajilia(tumblr), ferris4673(DA) or Mangataku(other places). Nice to meet you! - Really it's great to meet new people!

So the deal is that I'm going to make a otome game(no kidding...) and I need YOUR help! Yes you right there with the cute face and pretty eyes! <3
Before I bore you with more ranting I'll get to business: Here's what you can expect from the game and what I need.

About the game:

- The game will be 100% free, that means that you will not be paid, but you'll be part of the team! And I'll send you virtual hugs!

- The game is a comedy, romance otome game where you - wait for it- date a pizza! Um, yeah. It's titled A cheesy love story and it will feature a awkward, heroine who's trying way to hard to fit in with her classmates in high school. Starring with her, we have 3 lovely guys/pizzas who'll change her life forever!

- So basically: Girl buys pizza. Pizza turns into boys. Chaos and luuuv! <3

What can I offer?:

- I'm going to write and code in everything, please do know that even though I know how ren'py works and I've made games before, I am in no way a pro. I just kind of try until it goes rightXD

- I am not a native english speaker and that means there of course will be spelling mistakes and such and my english language is not as refined as my native language

- I have worked with visual novels and otome games before but my only released VN is 'Choice' which I made for NaNoReNO this year. You can find it here if you want an example of how I write: http://nanna4673.itch.io/choice
But please do note that I can do better than that when I don't just have a monthXD

- The sprites are already in place and my lovely friend Sophie are going to start working on them very soon! If you want an example of her absolutely awesome art then check out her DeviantART: http://lelouch5224.deviantart.com/ (She will draw the sprites in manga-style and not realistic like a lot of her drawings)

What do I need?:

- So in order to make this game as good as possible, I need things that I can't provide with myself (sadly*sob*). One thing is that even though my lovely friend Sophie is making the sprites, I am still in need of CG's. It doesn't really matter to me that it's a different art style(As long as it's manga-style). If I can't find anyone, I'll have to make the game without CG's which I would like to avoid since I have some great idea. A main menu picture would be great too(But I'm starting to beg for too much, ehe^^
EDIT: People have offered to make CG's and I think, it's enough^^

- As mentioned before I am not a native english speaker and I'll need somebody to proofread the script(And make the changes they find neccesarry<3). I'm not in a huge need for this but I'd be really nice^^
- I would very much like a logo for the game since that always looks so... Proffesional! XD The logo is not a must but i'd be cool with a cheesy and pizza-ish logo! (The pun is real I know)
EDIT:I have a logo and also people who's offered proofreading so that should be fine as well^^

- I am currently negociating with a GUI-artist to commision me, so for now I don't think I'm in need of GUI, but if it doesn't work out, I'll edit this!^^

- And lastly this is only if there's someone out there willing to do the task. Something that would be absolutely wonderfully amazing is if I could have backgrounds actually made for the game. For now I have found backgrounds (legally to use of course), but I still want the game to be as original as possible. I know there aren't many people who likes to draw background, but hey I can hope right?^^
EDIT: I still need this and I'd just really love a few backgrounds, so if you're interested please tell me!^^

So what do you get out of this?

I mentioned before that you wouldn't be paid for this, so what's in it for you?

- You're going to be a part of my super cool and awesome crew! Um... *cough* you'll be a part of the team consisting of only me and some help from my friend. That means since I'm still in the very early stages of the game, you can give me all the ideas you want and we can brainstom together!

- Of course you will be credited with lots of love and hugs!

- I will love you forever and ever (I don't know if that's a pro for you thoughXD)

Game description:
Warren Greenwood has been trying to fit in ever since she realized in middle school that you just can't be yourself if you want to be friends with the popular kids. Now 17 years old she has come a long way and is actually part of a popular group of girls in her high school - albeit more as a servant than a friend. And then she finally decides that it's time to move up the ranks and be accepted as a friend. She decides to throw a giant party in her house while her parents are out. She works for days, planning and making sure everything is perfect. On the special day she orders three big pizzas and waits for her breakthrough that will happen when the guests arrive at 7 PM. But they don't show up. And now Warren is alone with only 3 huge pizzas to comfort her. Or... Guys?

That's it! I hope you're interested in joining me and if not are you iterested in the game? Does it sound like something you would play? Well no matter what I hope you'll have a wonderful day!!^_^

PS: Here's some concept art of one of the guys Prosciutto. This is made by me, so the sprite will be a 100 times better but at least you can look at SOMETHING now! Okay I'm going *Hugs*<333!


Edit: Now there's also the first boy Salamis sketch by my lovely Sophie!^^ Isn't pretty? I already love it soon much!!!!:3

[deuceladoux]

Your story definitely seem unique, and I would be more than willing to proofread for you. Granted I don't know how much help that would be for you, but, figured I would offer anyways.

[nanna4673]

Your story definitely seem unique, and I would be more than willing to proofread for you. Granted I don't know how much help that would be for you, but, figured I would offer anyways.

Thank you very much!! I'd love your help but there's nothing to proofread right nowXD But when I finish the script I'll contact you, again thanks so much!!^^

[jascarly123zo]

LOL PIZZA TURNS INTO BOYS A+ I'm into this story already )

I'd also be willing to proofread! I'm very good at catching typos but if you need help with grammar as well, I can try my best! /o/

[nanna4673]

LOL PIZZA TURNS INTO BOYS A+ I'm into this story already )

I'd also be willing to proofread! I'm very good at catching typos but if you need help with grammar as well, I can try my best! /o/

Haha, I'm glad you like it! I'm very happy that you want to help and when the time comes to get the script proofread I'll keep you in mind! Thanks again!^^

[hiko27]

Very interesting. I'm a sucker for these types of games lol.

If you're still looking for a CG artist, I can help out? I'm busy with other stuff though so I might not be here everyday, but I enjoy doing CGs. CGs > any other type of art in a VN. If you want samples, you can click on my DA, art blog, or art thread (which I think is in my signature).

[nanna4673]

Very interesting. I'm a sucker for these types of games lol.

If you're still looking for a CG artist, I can help out? I'm busy with other stuff though so I might not be here everyday, but I enjoy doing CGs. CGs > any other type of art in a VN. If you want samples, you can click on my DA, art blog, or art thread (which I think is in my signature).

Other people has offered but since they can't do that many I'd love your help! ^^ The sprites are not finished yet but when they are, I'll message you:)

[hiko27]

Very interesting. I'm a sucker for these types of games lol.

If you're still looking for a CG artist, I can help out? I'm busy with other stuff though so I might not be here everyday, but I enjoy doing CGs. CGs > any other type of art in a VN. If you want samples, you can click on my DA, art blog, or art thread (which I think is in my signature).

Other people has offered but since they can't do that many I'd love your help! ^^ The sprites are not finished yet but when they are, I'll message you:)

Sure thing. Just link me to this thread if you message me after so long, I might have forgotten.