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Looking for a proofreader (Closed)

#1 Post by Katta » Mon Jun 29, 2015 10:45 am

I'm looking for a proofreader(s) for Virtuality, cyberpunk romance VN. BxB/G

Alex Bishop is a starry-eyed law student, keeping his nose buried in the books while dreaming of a high-profile future. Unlike everyone else, he just doesn't have the time to waste playing around in Virtuality, the virtual world that everyone, especially his girlfriend Alyssa, is crazy about. And more importantly, he just doesn't see why he should care when there's plenty to see and do in the real world. But after being nudged into making an account and a close encounter with one of the stars of Virtuality's fighting arenas, Silver Phoenix, Alex may find that there is a whole lot more "reality" to Virtuality than he thought.

The writing is by Tanya Rodgers, the text should be relatively clean except for some occasional typos - so I would like someone attentive.
For now I'm only looking to proofread the demo, which is 8500 words. The already written part is 61k (1/3 to 1/2 of the estimated plot).
Feedback on story flow/characters/possible routes/etc will be appreciated too.
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Re: Looking for a proofreader

#2 Post by nyansei » Mon Jun 29, 2015 1:35 pm

Hey, I don't mind helping to proofread, but I don't have prior experience or projects I have participated in to show.

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Re: Looking for a proofreader

#3 Post by Katta » Tue Jun 30, 2015 10:00 am

Thank you! PMed

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#4 Post by DrivenByTheWind » Wed Jul 01, 2015 1:58 am

Hello! I see you have found someone to proofread... if you would like someone else to help out I am happy to offer up my services. :)

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Re: Looking for a proofreader (Closed)

#5 Post by Katta » Wed Jul 01, 2015 4:32 pm

Thank you! Yes, I think we're done for the demo, I'll be opening this thread later for the whole text.

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