"Lost Two" VN, Looking for a Writer [closed]

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"Lost Two" VN, Looking for a Writer [closed]

#1 Post by SinaAzad » Wed Nov 11, 2015 7:06 pm

Heya!

I'm Looking for someone to proofread and edit my half written story , which is at 2000 words right now , And finish it, it should end around more than 10000 and less than 15000 words . I will do my best not to limit you to my own story. :wink:

the story : http://dropoftea-studio.com/wp-content/ ... roject.rtf

as for the story , it is about two girls , traveling from their village to another while heading to the great city of Togruk after disappearance of people . I'd like it to have a dark-ish atmosphere.
I have written short stuff before and I tried my best to write this too ... but I feel like I'm lacking in many ways as English is not my first language.
there are 3 endings.
it is from 3rd person view. the main events are sort of ... decided but I would like to talk it over and see if there is a way to make it better.

To be honest there is 0 budget for this visual novel and we can not offer a payment.

6th Dec :
70% of Character art is finished , I just need to add expressions and fix some errors.
around 40% of the Backgrounds are finished
40% of Music is finished
I'm starting to make a GUI right now.
I'm aiming to release a demo in next 3-4 weeks.
Right now I'm doing everything but I cannot write a good story in English.

To see how much progress is made I suggest you to look at the website.
here is the link to the website : http://dropoftea-studio.com/
Feel Free to E-mail Me on Sinam.azad@gmail.com Or send me a PM. you could also answer to this topic or even add me on skype !
here is my phone number as well : (+98) 921 582 37 57

( Update Dec 6th )My writer disappeared sins 27 November and I need to release the demo in 3 weeks ( around 4k words ), and have not received a single word so far . I will consider her Missed in Action as she wont answer me here , on skype and E-mail.

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Re: "Lost Two" Looking for Proofreader/editor/writer

#2 Post by SinaAzad » Fri Nov 13, 2015 9:13 am

Closed For now
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#3 Post by SinaAzad » Sun Dec 06, 2015 2:52 pm

re-opening the recruitment post as my writer is MIA.
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Re: "Lost Two" VN, Looking for a Writer

#4 Post by Godline » Mon Dec 07, 2015 3:49 am

How open are you for re-envisioning the plot?
Good luck with your search!

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Re: "Lost Two" VN, Looking for a Writer

#5 Post by SinaAzad » Mon Dec 07, 2015 4:05 am

As long as it doesnt require much of changes in recourses like backgrounds and character I dont mind
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Re: "Lost Two" VN, Looking for a Writer

#6 Post by SinaAzad » Mon Dec 07, 2015 4:04 pm

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