I'm Looking for someone to proofread and edit my half written story , which is at 2000 words right now , And finish it, it should end around more than 10000 and less than 15000 words . I will do my best not to limit you to my own story.
the story : http://dropoftea-studio.com/wp-content/ ... roject.rtf
as for the story , it is about two girls , traveling from their village to another while heading to the great city of Togruk after disappearance of people . I'd like it to have a dark-ish atmosphere.
I have written short stuff before and I tried my best to write this too ... but I feel like I'm lacking in many ways as English is not my first language.
there are 3 endings.
it is from 3rd person view. the main events are sort of ... decided but I would like to talk it over and see if there is a way to make it better.
To be honest there is 0 budget for this visual novel and we can not offer a payment.
6th Dec :
70% of Character art is finished , I just need to add expressions and fix some errors.
around 40% of the Backgrounds are finished
40% of Music is finished
I'm starting to make a GUI right now.
I'm aiming to release a demo in next 3-4 weeks.
Right now I'm doing everything but I cannot write a good story in English.
To see how much progress is made I suggest you to look at the website.
here is the link to the website : http://dropoftea-studio.com/
Feel Free to E-mail Me on Sinam.azad@gmail.com Or send me a PM. you could also answer to this topic or even add me on skype !
here is my phone number as well : (+98) 921 582 37 57
( Update Dec 6th )My writer disappeared sins 27 November and I need to release the demo in 3 weeks ( around 4k words ), and have not received a single word so far . I will consider her Missed in Action as she wont answer me here , on skype and E-mail.

