Red eyes in the darkness - Beta reader - we want YOU

[Ryue]

Hi

As mentioned in my WIP thread I'm currently doing a rewrite of the script for my demo due to critiques from beta (or more alpha) testers.
As I want to avoid to fall into the same traps as before I need a few beta or alpha readers so that I can get critique if the texts are interesting or boring, too short, too long and if the chars and the story come over good or not, .... .

For more information about the game: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 43&t=31644


The plan is that I give those beta/alpha readers parts of the script this week just as I finish writing it (the script already ingame including most of the CGs....the rewrite has made it so that I will need a few more CGs than I had planed originally but could have been worse). And I would then need a critique as soon as possible.
The whole thing is that I have holidays this week and thus need to hurry up before I get caught up in my job again, in order to finish the script and most of the other rewrites this week.

If you have questions or want to apply, let me know in here, via pm or on irc tnx.


On a note though when/if you apply: Please keep in mind that that is the ALPHA script of the rewrite and english is not my first language. Thus when the rewrite is done I WILL hire an editor so that the phrases themselves will be better suited for the english language (and the spelling errors corrected).

[Ryue]

Got two now but would still need 1 or 2 more alpha/beta readers.

[Amitte Sukku]

Hello! English isn't my native language either, but I can volunteer!

[Ryue]

Hi
Sent you a pm