"Lonely lullaby" looking for partners! - fantasy

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"Lonely lullaby" looking for partners! - fantasy

#1 Post by yato » Mon Jan 18, 2016 3:29 am

Lonely Lullaby.

""There is a person that I miss, Well... Not exactly a person, but a star.
No, I know what are you thinking. I know you think that I've lost completely my mind and that's okay, it's hard to believe...
I'm not mad at you, I promise.
Actually... I want to ask you something.
...
Long ago I fell in love with a star, she was the most beautiful and brightest of all the stars.
Her name was Annmarie, I still remember the way in which her emerald eyes lit up when she saw me for the first time, I still remember how soft her skin was...
Because I have forgotten many things throughout my life, I've forgotten the name of my first teacher and the age at which I gave my first kiss...
Oh, but I will never forget her.
...
I need to find Annmarie, Jamia.
I need you to help me to find her.
I need...
...
I need you to tell her that I have never stopped loving her."

Hi people! I want to present you this beautiful project that I've been planning for some months now. Welcome to the place where the star people live. In this story we will follow the steps of Jamia, in her quest to save the star people. On her way, we will know the story of the stars and many more legends that anyone couldn't ever believe.
I'm looking for partners who wants to help me with this VN.

-Genre: comedy, drama, romance, fantasy.
-Characters: well, there are many characters... but there are five main characters (5 sprites)
-The story is currently 30% completed! (but i got a lot of ideas per minute, so that can change at any time)
-And my first language is spanish, so I'm writing everything in spanish first because it's more easy for me.
-I'm not good speaking english and that's why i'm looking for a translator!
-Thanks for your attention!
-If you have a question just say it ^-^
SPRITE artist:
BG artist:
CG artist:
GUI designer:
Translator:
Composer:
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#2 Post by namastaii » Mon Jan 18, 2016 10:50 pm

Hmm, I don't speak Spanish but your English looks pretty good. If you were able to write out the Spanish sentences in English and put them together and let me or anyone else who is fluent in English look at it and correct the grammar and spelling and sentence flow, and look at an online translator for the Spanish part if we have to, I am sure me or anyone else would be able to help with that.

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#3 Post by yato » Mon Jan 18, 2016 11:30 pm

namastaii wrote:Hmm, I don't speak Spanish but your English looks pretty good. If you were able to write out the Spanish sentences in English and put them together and let me or anyone else who is fluent in English look at it and correct the grammar and spelling and sentence flow, and look at an online translator for the Spanish part if we have to, I am sure me or anyone else would be able to help with that.
Oh, that's great! I think you're right, I just need a person who helps me with the grammar and things like that :DD thank you.

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#4 Post by namastaii » Tue Jan 19, 2016 12:56 am

No problem. I hope it all works out^^

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#5 Post by Ferdokki » Wed Jan 27, 2016 10:30 pm

Was it only a translator/editor you were looking for, or other positions as well?

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#6 Post by Amitte Sukku » Sat Jul 16, 2016 5:45 pm

I'm eager to start working on anything what would involve me translating from English to Polish, if you'd take me :3
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#7 Post by sukoshimun » Sat Jul 16, 2016 6:05 pm

Hello! I'm kind of new to the visual novel community- not new in the sense of reading them, I've being doing so for years, but actually participating in their creation process! I think this would be a great project for me to start on, as my family is Cuban so both English and Spanish are both natural tongues to me. As such, I'd really love to help with this beautiful sounding story!

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