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Looking for proofreaders
Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2016 6:39 pm
by infel
I'm looking for a few proofreaders for my yuri game 'Black Dale: The Scarlet Witch. I'm currently wanting about four to six people. What I need is your honest opinion on the writing, characters, and events in the story. The first two chapter aren't filled with action, but hopefully convey the characters well. If you're interested you can leave me a comment or send me a message =). For more info on the game you can go here
https://lunarwingames.wordpress.com/bla ... tasydrama/. Due note that the word count is 28,000. It's pretty big, but I want a good demo. Also the format it's done in may look a bit weird, but it should be easy to read. Anyway, thanks again.
Re: Looking for proofreaders
Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2016 7:53 pm
by Seigetsu
I'd be interested. Specifically, what kind of feedback are you looking for? Do you want your proofreaders to nitpick spelling and grammatical errors? Or are you looking for a more general response? I find that in the case where you want proofreaders to nitpick and directly edit the work, a program that tracks changes (like MS Word) would be more useful, because you can easily go back and revert changes if you don't like them. Just a suggestion.
Oh, and do you have a deadline for when you want the proofreading to be done?
Re: Looking for proofreaders
Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2016 5:58 pm
by Nelico
I'd be interested. I'm as good at finding spelling errors as I'm bad at finding grammar errors (The curse of reading japanese VNs with MTs^^" )
But if you want feedback on writing and characters I might be able to help as a fellow writer. Especially since you seem to have fantasy elements(?)
Re: Looking for proofreaders
Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2016 9:41 pm
by Writingprobably
I'd be interesting in proofreading, if you're still looking for people.
Re: Looking for proofreaders
Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2016 9:39 pm
by infel
Sorry for not getting back to your three DX. Been a bit busy. I'm sending you guys an email now though on your questions and such. Thanks again
Re: Looking for proofreaders
Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2016 9:43 pm
by infel
Writingprobably wrote:I'd be interesting in proofreading, if you're still looking for people.
Hey, I'm still looking for others if you're free. Ps- sorry for the late reply =(
Re: Looking for proofreaders
Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2016 4:20 am
by Writingprobably
Sure. Just send me a link.
Re: Looking for proofreaders
Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2016 6:04 am
by Amecha
I could proofread. I'm decently good at noticing awkward writing, phrasing, dialogue, spelling errors and grammar mistakes.