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Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2016 1:16 pm
by Meg'
Hello!

The translation for my game is done and I need a few people to proofread the english version and check if there are any typos left. A good level in english would be appreciated.
What needs to be proofread:

Aiden's route: Writer16

Daemon's route: Valtiene

The Devil's route: Averxy
I still need one more proofreader for the Devil's route :)

About Anges Démoniaques:

Type: otome game, non-commercial
Genre: romance, fantasy
Summary:

"If you had to sell your soul to the devil to save someone dear to you, would you do it?

No matter what the number of signed contracts is, the quantity of spilled blood and the importance of broken lives.
Some things are unavoidable. Good and Evil.

Those two opposites blend, looking like each other, becoming unrecognizable. All that's left is to hope that this time, the end be different."



Past lives, parallel worlds, magical powers. Chiyo, the heroine, had never really thought about them.

She lived a quiet life with her parents until one day, while looking for a pack of bottled water in the basement, she discovers strange stuffed animals. After taking one of them, she feels something pushing her toward the door locked by her father and looses consciousness. As she comes to her senses, Chiyo doesn't recognize the family basement and realizes that she is not in her world anymore!

Between demons and magicians, Chiyo will have to choose a side.

To make things worst, the one who will decide her fate is none other than... The Devil himself!
More informations: Here

Thank you in advance for your help! You name will be added to the credits, of course!
To apply, answer to this thread and I'll send you the link to download the english version (please, don't share it. The english version isn't "officially" released).

Re: Looking for proofreaders - project [Anges Démoniaques]

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2016 1:43 pm
by Writer16
Hi!

I'd be interested in checking for typos. I think I'm decent in grammar, but I can't lie and say, I'm an expert. Anyway, let me know what you need, that is if you're interested, and I'll get started. Deadline and all. :D

Thanks -- Allison Diamond.

Re: Looking for proofreaders - project [Anges Démoniaques]

Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2016 2:58 am
by Meg'
Thank you, I'll use your help then! :D

I think proofreading the whole game can be a lot to ask for, so I'll only ask you to proofread Aiden's route (alias "The cat").

I still need to upload the file on mediafire or dropbox, so I'll contact you today by pm to give you the link.

Re: Looking for proofreaders - project [Anges Démoniaques]

Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2016 5:01 pm
by Averxy
Hello! I'd love to help you as a proofreader if you still need one! I have a passion for English and I like to think that I am skilled in the language, grammar included. Thank you for reading this and I hope I can be of help!