Hi, I am Kamilla, the writer of my first visual novel "Lost in Time" , which will be around 10000-15000 words.
Summary:
When Graciela, princess of Day Kingdom, turned down a marriage proposal, she never expected Icarus, the prince of Imperium, to declare war on her kingdom. Faced with the remnants of its collapse, she goes on a quest to Night Kingdom to find the Xronos Hourglass, which could allow her to turn back time. Despite her resolve to stay to her plan, she finds herself considering Night Kingdom a home and falling for Prince Cepheus. Will she choose a future with him, or return to the past to reclaim her lost kingdom? Despite her hesitance in making a choice, she has to decide when Prince Icarus comes for her the second time.
Characters:
Day Kingdom:
Graciela Lichtfallow (Ciela) (age 18), main character.
The princess of a small and remote kingdom. A determined girl chasing after a clear goal. Focused on her studies to be the heir to the throne, she did not have many friends growing up, so her family comes first before all else. Filled with regret for being the cause of her fallen family and kingdom, she resolves to reverse time to bring back all that was lost.
Melville Lichtfallow (Mel) (age 15)
Sister of the main character. A sweet and kind hearted girl who looks up to her big sister.
King Lamonte Lichtfallow (age 40), Queen Karolina Lichtfallow (age 38)
Loving parents of the main character who taught her to rule a kingdom with wisdom and love. Treasuring their daughter’s happiness and respecting her choice, they rejected Icarus’s marriage proposal, unknowingly sealing the fate of demise.
Harlen Stratsburg (age 19)
The knight responsible for protecting the main character. Called away on a mission before the war, he was able to escape from the purge and has been searching for her ever since.
Night Kingdom:
Cepheus Sombriohes (age 20), prince of Night Kingdom.
Tired of his father’s constant frolicking with women, he aims to be a ruler who thinks in the best interest of his kingdom. Mistaking the main character as one of his father’s target of affection, he was initially cold and indifferent. They later bonded over their love for their respective kingdom.
King Tolentino Sombriohes (age 45)
The ruler of Night Kingdom who allowed the main character to stay at the palace as a guest. The only person who knows the identity of the main character from the start. A mysterious character who knows more about the Xronos Hourglass than he lets on.
Ferdinand Lochnager (age 25)
The advisor of the kingdom. An important member of the court who does all sorts of tasks in order to sustain the kingdom in the (often frequent) absence of the king. Suspicious of the main character for hiding her background, he was against her becoming too close to the prince.
Roselle Camargo (age 16)
A chambermaid of the palace who befriends the main character. A girl who reminds the main character of her late sister.
Imperium Kingdom:
Icarus Granados (age 22)
The prince who would not take “no” as a answer, consequently initiating the war that sparked the beginning of the story. He intended to not kill her in the war from the start, and has been in pursuit of her since then.
Current progress:
Outline: 100%
Writing: 70%
Art: 0%
Programming: 0%
Music: 0%
Currently hoping to recruit:
1 Sprite artist
1 CG artist
Since this is a free project, I won't be able to pay you.
If you are interested, or if you have questions, send me a mail:
devilamb8@gmail.com
[Closed for now] "Lost in Time" (romance, fantasy)
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[Closed for now] "Lost in Time" (romance, fantasy)
Last edited by Devilamb on Wed Sep 05, 2018 10:27 am, edited 6 times in total.
Re: "Lost in Time" (romance, fantasy) Looking for a Team
the protagonit is 18 and her mom is 32 she had her at 14 year old, eww disgusting she was a minnor age when she had her daughter. This story look like something a 12 year old would write no offense but you should make her mom older, its kind of disturbing she wa so young when she had her.
Re: "Lost in Time" (romance, fantasy) Looking for sprite and cg artist
@Luthvn,
Thank you for pointing that out. This post was not updated, so the ages were wrong as you mentioned.
No offence, but please do take the time to proofread what you've written next time. It's hard for someone to take your comment seriously when there are so many spelling mistakes and inappropriate uses of punctuations.
Lastly, I'd advise you not to jump to conclusions regarding whether or not this is "something a 12-year-old would write" when this is only a brief summary instead of the story itself.
Good day.
Thank you for pointing that out. This post was not updated, so the ages were wrong as you mentioned.
No offence, but please do take the time to proofread what you've written next time. It's hard for someone to take your comment seriously when there are so many spelling mistakes and inappropriate uses of punctuations.
Lastly, I'd advise you not to jump to conclusions regarding whether or not this is "something a 12-year-old would write" when this is only a brief summary instead of the story itself.
Good day.
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