al|together 2008 Day 4: Moonshine

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al|together 2008 Day 4: Moonshine

#1 Post by ChocoEd »

Batting fourth for al|together 2008 is a tremendous cleanup hitter, "Moonshine" from the circle Sakura Mint (original title "月照~ツキノテラス~"), skillfully translated by AstCd2.

This is perhaps the centerpiece of the festival. Its production values are unusually high for a freeware novel game, including character voices and even custom-sung music. The story, too, is unique and engaging, and the game earned a "recommended" rating from NaGIsa.

Downloads are available for both Windows and Mac, so enjoy! Note that the accompanying essays on the site can contain spoilers, so you may want to play it through before reading them.

http://altogether.insani.org/2008/4.html

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#2 Post by Blue Lemma »

Downloading now, but I have to ask:
Why is the "crown jewel" being released on day 4/6? That seems unusual.
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Blue Lemma wrote:Downloading now, but I have to ask:
Why is the "crown jewel" being released on day 4/6? That seems unusual.
(1) the fourth batter in baseball is?
(2) the fourth course in a 6-course meal is?

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#4 Post by Blue Lemma »

I'm not cultured (neither pop- nor fine-) enough to know that stuff! :lol:

I thought it would be something like:
Day 1: release 2nd best game
Days 2-5: other games
Day 6: release best game

...or something like that. But that's just me :wink:
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Seung Park wrote:
Blue Lemma wrote:Downloading now, but I have to ask:
Why is the "crown jewel" being released on day 4/6? That seems unusual.
(1) the fourth batter in baseball is?
(2) the fourth course in a 6-course meal is?
The fourth batter in baseball is the cleanup batter. His role is vital considering that all of the fields bases could be loaded by the time he steps up to bat. To ensure that he and the three men on base get their runs, it is imperative that he score a homerun.

The fourth course in a six course meal is typically fish and/or pasta. The fifth course of a meal is the actual entree while the sixth is desert. The first three courses are usually an appetizer, a soup and a salad.

The baseball analogy is sound but the dinner analogy is flawed.

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#6 Post by Samu-kun »

I'm still confused why you wouldn't just save the best for last, but I'll play it regardless.... XD

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#7 Post by Blue Lemma »

Thanks, bowling pin :)

So I played the game...
;_;
Very cute and well-done, although I thought it was a bit strange how the protagonist
just accepted he was falling in love with a "girl" soooo easily. I guess he's more open-minded than most 27-year-olds (I think he was about 27?)
Of course, dwelling on the point probably would have detracted from the story overall, so I guess it makes sense.

I'd say it's a good solid #4, whatever the significance of #4 is :wink:
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#8 Post by chokkidre »

For some reason, I am not able to download any of the games from the website.. if it's not against the TOS, can someone please upload the games in sendspace, megaupload or etc.? I'll give you a virtual cookie.

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#9 Post by Samu-kun »

(you need bittorrent or some other equivalent file sharing program to download the games. Strange, I thought just about every anime fan would have it... =w=)

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#10 Post by Hime »

I just finished playing this and oh, it was such a cute, touching game! The whole game had this very sweet atmosphere and was a relaxing VN experience. Also, great voiceacting and vocal pieces... Especially for a freeware game! :o

I'd say the pacing could have been a little better and I would have liked to see a little more of the game, but it works fine as it is and I recommend it to any person who is open-minded enough not to mind
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#11 Post by chokkidre »

@Samu-kun: Trust me, I already have a bittorrent program.. it just that whenever I try to download the game, I end up getting an 'Sorry, this page cannot be displayed" error.

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#12 Post by AlphaProspector »

Crap, pity it was so short! Sadly, I could also see everything coming from the go... ;_; Didn't prevent me from making me feel sad.

Lovely I must say. But, to the characters:
"Guyz, intarwebz lurks in the world, you know, it's like the cookie monster. If you want change that's fine but... don't go around breaking hearts for nothing or to make me feel sad xP"
I have to say I preferred True Remembrance and Crimsoness but still this was really really nice. And, crap, it's the Sentive syndrome, those guys rock! The theme song... Pretty. And that should go in capitals.

grrr... I would've loved moar though. Don't you hate that moment when you finish reading some of these? I'm getting the same sensation when I finish a book that had me glued for hours.

To anyone interested in the topic Moonshine uses, watch the argentinean movie XXY.

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0995829/

Plot: This is the dramatic story of a 15-year-old hermaphrodite. She lives with her parents, who have to cope with the challenges of her medical condition.

Sounds familiar? Could it even be the past of Mai?
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#13 Post by chokkidre »

Seriously, can someone pleeease upload the file for those of us who aren't able to download the file (for some odd reason). I'll give you two virtual cookies. D:

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#14 Post by Ren »

Uploading now, it's going to take some time, apparently :P

Edit: Curse you, Monele! http://www.sendspace.com/file/rj7w22
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#15 Post by monele »

Aww, I just started too! ^^;...

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Megaupload : http://www.megaupload.com/fr/?d=51HKNQR5

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