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Writer for Hire !

#1 Post by Raina » Sun Jul 12, 2015 1:04 am

Hii everyone ^w^ my name is Aassma I'm 18 years old! I love reading so much and of cours writing. I write fictional stories
I may be super lazy but when it come to writing I give it all I can!
The genres I am interested in writing are romance (GxB _ BxG ), mystery,horror and comedy.
I can give u many Ideas For you'r next visual novel

pliz pm me if u want to know more oh also I can use "some" japanese words just some !! like bakka XD knows only bad words Xd just kidding ._. any way again pm me onigayshimas >w<

and This is an example of my writing (chapter one) :

Corpse Diary
Day 1 :
I have never imagined that something like that would happen …. Me ..dead in the most ugly and painful way
No one would believe that corpse has feeling ...even me … until I become one !
Dear death… why are u so Beautiful and unfair !
Smell of blood …Why …. I'm all red? ! it hurts … my hands, my head, my legs, I feel like they are ripped. I can only see with one eye.
What a nightmare !
Or I am …dead … I saw lights, so this is paradise … I smiled : I didn't imagine that I would make it here !
???: not yet little girl
Me : what ?!! who’s this ?!
A man with a beautiful white wings showed up from no where flying in front of me
??: u look horrible
Me : y- you are an angel
??: no I’m not. those wings are just for decoration
Me: so where am I and who are you?
??: you are dead but before your death some one made a contract with me …and I am a book of reborn
Me: what ! you are a book ? ._.
Book of reborn: you should worry about yourself being dead not me as a book
Me: this is just a nightmare …just a nightmare
Book of reborn: okay listen to me little girl you are going to re-live for one week , the week before you died …so yes you are going to back to the past and you will remember everything happened in that week except why and how you were died. this is a second chance to atone your sins
Me : w…-what sins?!
Book of reborn : the sins that you are going to do after one week … now if you excuse me my wife is waiting for me, she is a beautiful cooking book
Me: wait ...what?!

The weird man disappeared and I found myself lying down in the ground
looking at the roof of my room I felt relived
What a dream ! I should stop watching horror movies before sleeping
*knock* knock*
My little brother knocked the door and entred to my room holding a little pink box
He said : happy birthday Olivia
Happy birthday ?? but my birthday was last week ?
Me : what are u talking about honey my birthday was last week we celebrate our birthdays every year not every week
Little brother : I know that but today is your birthday February 14
He ran to my phone , picked it up and gave it to me : "look, today is February 14"
I was shocked. last week was Feb 14 and today is 14 too
It wasn't a dream …and that means ...I’m died !
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#2 Post by Tracy Bullet » Tue Jul 14, 2015 8:38 pm

I'm thinking putting up a sample or link to some of your writing would be helpful for you as well as people who are looking to hire you. I got much more attention when I figured out that it's easiest to have some stock stuff to give a quick show of your strengths (and weaknesses). Good luck on the job hunt!

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#3 Post by Raina » Thu Jul 16, 2015 3:13 pm

Tracy Bullet wrote:I'm thinking putting up a sample or link to some of your writing would be helpful for you as well as people who are looking to hire you. I got much more attention when I figured out that it's easiest to have some stock stuff to give a quick show of your strengths (and weaknesses). Good luck on the job hunt!
oh thanx for your advice ^w^ I knew that I have to do that XD but I didn't ! stupid me -_-

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#4 Post by trooper6 » Thu Jul 16, 2015 5:49 pm

Your writing sample has a number of grammatical errors, spelling errors, punctuation errors, capitalization errors, spacing errors, etc. You might want to edit your sample in order to give a better impression of yourself as a writer to potential comissioners.
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Re: Writer for Hire !

#5 Post by Raina » Thu Jul 16, 2015 7:18 pm

trooper6 wrote:Your writing sample has a number of grammatical errors, spelling errors, punctuation errors, capitalization errors, spacing errors, etc. You might want to edit your sample in order to give a better impression of yourself as a writer to potential comissioners.
yep !I know but I don't know yet who to ask to help me on editing !

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