Novice Writer looking for experience.

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Novice Writer looking for experience.

#1 Post by Arturia » Fri Jan 29, 2016 4:21 pm

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Good evening/morning all.

Currently looking for any position where I can gain experience writing or even help as much as I can.
I want to mention before I begin, like the title mentions I'm a novice writer currently and as such I would like to work for free if possible as all I would like to gain is experience and the joy of writing.
I have written a bit on my own but currently lack a few skills which I will gain in time.
The stories I have written before have been in what I thought was a light novel format.. but soon found out that my style is better suited towards Visual novels.
I'll paste parts of my story for you to see. It's still a rough draft so please don't look at that but at the story itself first.
Tatsu: I'm home.. anyone back yet..

Rika: welcome back nii-chan. i got home just a few minutes ago.

Tatsu: i see.. how does it feel to be finally be a third year Rika..

Rika hangs her head, with a soft voice she replied.

Rika: It feels different but ... i feel like i can truly be myself and not rely on my popularity..(she lifts her head and gives a smile.) my image change might of been a bit sudden but I'm still me in the end.

Tatsu: that's great Rika...so any confessions?

with a sense of embarrassment and confusion she replies with a stutter.

Rika: w, w, what are you saying..there's no way that anyone got confessed to on there first day.

Tatsu: i have ...

he replies smoothly as if it was natural to get confessed..

Tatsu: I'm joking, haha but the way you acting it does seem like you did.. but i wont pry any further, as long as you enjoyed your day.

Rika replies in a half angry and half dissatisfied voice.

Rika: and how was high school.. you make it on time.?

Tatsu wonders for a bit and then replies.

Tatsu: hmm..i did but in the process i nearly got hit by a car and ran into a girl on the way there.. weird thing was i accidently ran into another girl after school. (he looked down and wondered again.. then said with a low voice)well it was a surprising .

(he thinks to himself) I wonder, was she really that....

Rika: Hmm...well then i guess i have to wake you up with water then..(she exclaims with a sinister smile).
And another for later in the story
Rika: Nii-chan, Were you dreaming about that time again?

Tatsu: Don’t worry, its in the past now…remember, we need to move on Rika.

As he affirmed that he is alright, he puts his hand on her short hair and rubs it..

Rika: Nii-chan.. haha that’s ticklish..

As they walk side by side they both arrive in the lounge, Although Rika and there mother already had supper, Tatsu sat down at the Dining table and started to eat.

Rika: Sorry I didn’t wake you for Supper Nii-Chan

(He seems to have been worried about something when he got home and then when he started to call out her name…I didn’t want to wake him and take him away from that place.)

Tatsu: Anything made by you is good to eat at any time Rika…Ittadakimasu.

As Tatsu Picks his Chopsticks to eat his food, they drop as suddenly as he picked them up.
He didn’t realise it until now, That his hands were trembling…
He thought the past was all behind him and that he wouldn’t see her again…hoping that it was for the best..

Rika: Nii-chan? Are you ok.. Sorry you must still be tired, do you want to have it later?

Tatsu: t t that would be good thanks…rika. I think I'm going to go for a walk quick to wake myself up..

Tatsu's Mother: Don’t go too far or stay out late at this time, but if you happen to pass the convenience store…Get some milk and an ice cream for yourself and Rika.

Tatsu: alright, Will do.
If you would like any information regarding anything I can provide Please Pm me.
If I happen to get an invite I will close this and when that project is done ill reopen..

Good luck with future and current Visual novels and hope to work with you all..
Thank you for your time and I hope you all enjoy your day.
Last edited by Arturia on Mon May 16, 2016 2:29 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: Novice Writer looking for experience.

#2 Post by CarrotyCat » Fri Jan 29, 2016 4:38 pm

Welcome to the forum! I know MissDarkness is looking for a writer/editor. I'll direct MissDarkness here. good luck! :)

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Re: Novice Writer looking for experience.

#3 Post by Arturia » Mon May 16, 2016 2:28 am

Currently i have stopped writing and working with Vn's as i tend to drift away from projects i am working on which then causes delays.. I don't want to trouble project owners with my own problems..

as such i am closing my topic until another time.

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