I would love some critique, spell check, feedback, and or small polish ideas, before I put this online.
Thanks and Enjoy
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Feedback-wise, I thought it was funny, and a relatively accurate depiction of this election.
I found some typos (There's not that many, I just put corrections underneath them):
Hastag Nochill Hillary...
Sadly is the world right?
I was very fond of a lovly little
My dragon can only be seen by true patiots
[...] needs to get punched in the throught. [...]
I Hillary Clinton Bot will destablize as many Arab countries as it needs,
*I, Hillary Clinton Bot, (This mistake showed up a few times.)
*as I need to / *as is needed
I WORKED TO GODDAMN HARD FOR THIS!
During her inogeration speech,
*inauguration (don't worry, I had no clue how to spell this either.)
Also, I think it's actually "Drumpf," rather than "Drumph."
Anyhow, nice work! I enjoyed it!
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