Best Effing Election Ever is a short satire game I made about Donald Trump and the current election season.
I would love some critique, spell check, feedback, and or small polish ideas, before I put this online.
Thanks and Enjoy
Best Election Ever
Best Election Ever
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Re: Best Election Ever
Pretty funny idea. This reminds me of a Creationist Cat video about him being in the Republican Debates.
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Re: Best Election Ever
I've been sorta disappointed to not find many political VNs, on Lemmasoft at least, considering how insane election season has been. So I was delighted to see this one!
Feedback-wise, I thought it was funny, and a relatively accurate depiction of this election.
I found some typos (There's not that many, I just put corrections underneath them):
Also, I think it's actually "Drumpf," rather than "Drumph."
Anyhow, nice work! I enjoyed it!
Feedback-wise, I thought it was funny, and a relatively accurate depiction of this election.
I laughed so hard when I saw that during the question about Trump's tiny hands, the only viable option was to attack Bernie. Also when I saw the option "Sand Jews."
I like the resolution of this game for some reason. It reminds me of the Nintendo DS screens. xDI found some typos (There's not that many, I just put corrections underneath them):
To make it not to hard-
*too
Hastag Nochill Hillary...
*Hashtag
Sadly is the world right?
*word
I was very fond of a lovly little
*lovely
My dragon can only be seen by true patiots
*patriots
[...] needs to get punched in the throught. [...]
*throat
Russian Natzis
*Nazis
I Hillary Clinton Bot will destablize as many Arab countries as it needs,
*I, Hillary Clinton Bot, (This mistake showed up a few times.)
*destabilize
*as I need to / *as is needed
I WORKED TO GODDAMN HARD FOR THIS!
*TOO
During her inogeration speech,
*inauguration (don't worry, I had no clue how to spell this either.)
The capitalization was off in a few sentences. ie. "Anderson cooper," improper nouns being capitalized.*too
Hastag Nochill Hillary...
*Hashtag
Sadly is the world right?
*word
I was very fond of a lovly little
*lovely
My dragon can only be seen by true patiots
*patriots
[...] needs to get punched in the throught. [...]
*throat
Russian Natzis
*Nazis
I Hillary Clinton Bot will destablize as many Arab countries as it needs,
*I, Hillary Clinton Bot, (This mistake showed up a few times.)
*destabilize
*as I need to / *as is needed
I WORKED TO GODDAMN HARD FOR THIS!
*TOO
During her inogeration speech,
*inauguration (don't worry, I had no clue how to spell this either.)
Also, I think it's actually "Drumpf," rather than "Drumph."
Anyhow, nice work! I enjoyed it!
Re: Best Election Ever
Holy crap! Thank you, you two. I thought no one played this game. umm. super thanks .
@robovelociraptor thanks for the edits. I will put them to good use
@robovelociraptor thanks for the edits. I will put them to good use
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