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[COMPLETED] ALLBLACK -Phase1- [Action][Psychological][Sci-fi]

Posted: Mon Mar 25, 2019 9:14 am
by tiya_nofurita
Also copied here. I think it meets the requirement since the story is about 10.000 words
[ALLBLACK. Phase 1]


"What will you see when you die?"


Last night, I woke up without being able to remember what had happened to me, as if I had just been born yesterday. But no one could also prove that "the past" is real. It's possible that I just "existed" now, and my memories were just fabricated.

This is me right now, lost, confused, and don't know where to go. Maybe I was just being born last night, but somehow, "my past" still haunted me. I can't remember it, but they said I am the one responsible who dropped the helicopter.

Fuck! If only I could remember something. I can't even remember my own name. But why?! Even though I can't remember my own name, but I can remember the one who made me like this?!

It's not only that....I'm not even sure if I'm a human being. Not after what happened today. I can stop the rain. No, it's not like I can change rain to sunny weather...I make thousand droplets of rain stop falling, hanging it in the air like defying the gravitation around me.

.... Far from the bottom of my heart, I'm sure that I have to end all of this.

My name is --------------, let me tell you my story.

Image
Screenshot of the main menu



Original story : fsc
Visual novel adaptation : me
(yes I will do illustration, sprites, GUI design, scripting and programming. Good luck to me :x)
BG and music will taken from free assets

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--PROGRESS-- (late March '19)
Story 100/100
Scripting 20/100
GUI design 80/100 (Ren'Py default design already fine as it is, I might edit it later based on my preference though)
Sprites 0/100
CG 0/100
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[*]Words count : around 10.000
[*]CG planned so far : 2 or 3 on Chapter 1
[*]Sprites : 2 major character on Chapter 1, might draw additional for side character if I feel like it :p

This is an adaptation of published novel in my country with our native language, with the same story and author. We both agree to export it into visual novel format, albeit a niche market, to expand the readers outside my country.
There is no real deadline, I just working it on my spare time, but I plan to release demo (Chapter 1) around end of May.

Depends on the reception of Chapter 1, I will continue working to adapt 1 book (6 chapter, around 60k words). Right now, we are not planning anything to release it commercially.

Looking forward for your opinion of the story (based on synopsis) and the visuals so far! :D

p.s : I might need proofreader. Someone willing to help me?

Re: [COMPLETED] ALLBLACK -Phase1- [Action][Psychological][Sci-fi]

Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2019 5:42 pm
by tiya_nofurita

Re: [COMPLETED] ALLBLACK -Phase1- [Action][Psychological][Sci-fi]

Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2019 6:40 am
by SbHunter
I'm not usually a fan of action and sci-fi, but this looks interesting! I'll give it a try! OwO)9
Also, congrats for finishing chapter 1~!

Re: [COMPLETED] ALLBLACK -Phase1- [Action][Psychological][Sci-fi]

Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2019 9:40 am
by tiya_nofurita
SbHunter wrote:
Thu Apr 25, 2019 6:40 am
I'm not usually a fan of action and sci-fi, but this looks interesting! I'll give it a try! OwO)9
Also, congrats for finishing chapter 1~!
Thanks! What platform do you download by the way?
I always appreciate any kind of feedback :D

You can post your feedback on finished section here: viewtopic.php?f=11&t=54921
to keep it on topic

Re: [COMPLETED] ALLBLACK -Phase1- [Action][Psychological][Sci-fi]

Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2019 12:46 pm
by SbHunter
It's rare to see anyone make the VN for Android, so I tried it! Afterall, I've been wanting to see how the VN might turn out on Android, since I would like to make mine available to play on phone too later :3

And yessir, I'll post the feedback on the finished game thread when I'm done! >w<)7