Oh Boy! Expected Statements!

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Oh Boy! Expected Statements!

#1 Post by TheBrightCube » Mon May 16, 2016 7:43 pm

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File "game/script.rpy", line 21: expected statement.
        "August 22, the first day of school."
                                             ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 22: expected statement.
        "None of this feels real, honestly."
                                            ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 23: expected statement.
         "I mean, I just moved here all the way from Belgium"
                                                             ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 24: expected statement.
        "and now I'm starting sophomore year in one of the best schools in the world!"
                                                                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 25: expected statement.
        "I just know that from this day forth, my life will completel-"
                                                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 26: expected statement.
        "Wait."
               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 27: expected statement.
        "IS THAT THE TIME? SHIT I HAVE TO GET DRESSED"
                                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 28: expected statement.
        "I was so into my monologue I forgot what time it was!"
                                                               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 29: expected statement.
        "*As I am getting ready, the screen is black*"
                                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 30: expected statement.
        "Except for the textbox of me saying shit during it."
                                                             ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 31: expected statement.
        y "Good morning swee-"
                              ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 32: expected statement.
        w "LOVE YOU THANK YOU BYE!!"
                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 33: expected statement.
        "*cg of her running with a waffle in her mouth*"
                                                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 34: expected statement.
        w "IS THAT THE BUS? CRAP!"
                                  ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 35: expected statement.
        "Eventually, I managed to get the bus to stop for me. Not without the bus driver scolding me, of course, with words I wouldn’t dare repeat."
                                                                                                                                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 36: expected statement.
        "When I got on, I noticed that it was packed to the brim.   As I scanned the rows with the bus driver heckling me to sit down a hand at the very back waved at me to come over."
                                                                                                                                                                                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 37: expected statement.
        "When I got back there, I saw a tired looking student with green hair looking out the window."
                                                                                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 38: expected statement.
        "Pretty edgy."
                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 39: expected statement.
        "I took my seat next to them as they turned to me."
                                                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 40: expected statement.
        m "You’re new here aren’t you?"
                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 41: expected statement.
        w "Oh! Yeah, I’m a transfer student from Belgium!"
                                                          ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 42: expected statement.
        m "You excited?"
                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 43: expected statement.
        w "Yeah!"
                 ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 44: expected statement.
        m "Bet’ you’re gonna have a good year?"
                                               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 45: expected statement.
        w "Mhm!"
                ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 46: expected statement.
        "He laughed in my face."
                                ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 47: expected statement.
        m "Ha, well, welcome to Hell."
                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 48: expected statement.
        "He turned back to the window, leaving me awkwardly sitting there in silence."
                                                                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 49: expected statement.
        "Someone needs to cheer up…"
                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 50: expected statement.
        w "Well,I’m Tournai!"
                             ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 51: expected statement.
        "Still in his current position, he reached out a hand which I readily took, and we shook hands. I noticed his black finger nails and fingerless gloves."
                                                                                                                                                                ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 52: expected statement.
        "Total edgelord"
                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 53: expected statement.
        m "Morgan."
                   ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 54: expected statement.
        w "So… How is it like there?"
                                     ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 55: expected statement.
        m "Well, I mean, it’s good if ya wanna do art or go to some ivy league school. The experience itself is not so great to be honest, but I’m probably asking for it."
                                                                                                                                                                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 56: expected statement.
        "I took into account everything I noticed about Morgan: Green hair, tired eyes with eyeliner, fingerless gloves, black nail polish, and a stone-cold face, not to mention pretty chubby. I would imagine he wouldn’t have the best social experience at school."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 57: expected statement.
        "Hopefully, he just meant that school was hard. If there was a bullying problem at school no doubt I would get targeted for being a foreign transfer student!"
                                                                                                                                                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 58: expected statement.
        m "But I’m sure you’ll be alright…"
                                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 59: expected statement.
        "Eventually, we did get to school."
                                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 60: expected statement.
        "*Shows Picture of the School*"
                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 62: expected statement.
        "The large yellow and red building loomed over us sending a shiver down my spine by how intimidating the size was. The front of the school had neatly trimmed trees with bright yellow leaves and hedges lining the surprisingly very white paved walkways."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 63: expected statement.
        "It was teeming with life, students sitting at the benches or on the freshly mowed grass laughing and sharing what fun things they did over the summer. I turned to with the thought of asking him about how his summer break was when suddenly…"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 64: expected statement.
        q "HEY IT’S THEM!"
                          ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 65: expected statement.
        "All conversation seemed to cease when everyone turned to see what was going on. I turned my head too and noticed that practically everyone who was once sitting down was now standing in a crowd surrounding a group of people."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 66: expected statement.
        "Students were either watching or trying with some succeeding in talking to them. I wonder what the big deal is?"
                                                                                                                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 67: expected statement.
        w "What’s going on? Who are they?"
                                          ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 68: expected statement.
        m "Oh, only the most popular people at school. Insert descriptions of all members here."
                                                                                                ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 69: expected statement.
        "With all their diverse appearances and personalities, they all seemed like a cast of characters in some high school movie or video game."
                                                                                                                                                  ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 70: expected statement.
        "What if this really was some kind of movie or video game, starring me as the main protagonist, hoping to join into their ranks in popularity which I do after helping them in some way, or falling in love with one of them, experiencing an emotional roller coaster from beginning to end."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 71: expected statement.
        "But in all honestly, I was probably just another extra walking around in the background of their no doubt perfect lives. I tuned back in to Morgan who was still talking about them."
                                                                                                                                                                                              ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 72: expected statement.
        m "They’re all in the same club too but it's like, super hard to get into."
                                                                                   ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 73: expected statement.
        w "Ooooo, sounds prestigious! What kind of club is it?"
                                                               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 74: expected statement.
        m "It’s nothing special really it’s just a –"
                                                     ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 75: expected statement.
        "He was cut off by the school bell ringing, signaling not just for everyone to get inside and into class but that summer break was officially over. Everyone including the group of popular kids got up and started heading into the school in droves."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 76: expected statement.
        "Thankfully, it turned out I had the same homeroom as Morgan so I just followed him there. I was considering asking Morgan to finish telling me about the club those mysterious popular kids were in, but the hallway was already too loud with the chatting and shouting of teenagers, not to mention hard to move around, I decided to keep it to myself."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 77: expected statement.
        "It was probably for the best anyways, I mean, what was the point in having interest in a club I couldn’t possibly get into? It was probably going to be pretty boring anyways."
                                                                                                                                                                                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 78: expected statement.
        w "Even if I’m not the protagonist of some tropey piece of American media, from this day forth my life will completely change, and I can say that at least! I can try new things, make new friends, breathe new air! This was a new chapter, an exciting adventure, a brand ne-"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 79: expected statement.
        w "I was taken out of my thoughts when we're finally arrived at the door to homeroom: 218C. I was nearly out of breath once we got there! We had to walk to pretty much the other end of the school, and that together with all our navigating and wedging through people just trying to get here, it was enough exercise to not have to do PE for a year! Well, I’m sure that at least the teachers were nice!"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 80: expected statement.
        t "Can you headaches just shut up for a minute?!"
                                                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 81: expected statement.
        t "Alright, let’s see here… Ah it looks like we have a new student."
                                                                            ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 82: expected statement.
        t "Whatsherface! Get your butt up here and introduce yourself! And you better be sharp about it!"
                                                                                                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 83: expected statement.
        "I was wrong."
                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 84: expected statement.
        w "Hello, I'm Tournai! I moved here from Belgium and I'm ha-"
                                                                     ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 85: expected statement.
        t "Alright that's enough dear now everyone turn to page 75 in your textbook and begin reading"
                                                                                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 86: expected statement.
        "Well… That sucked. Looks like this school isn't all sunshine and lollipops as I had thought."
                                                                                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 87: expected statement.
        "Fast forward later, we were now at lunch. Morgan practically dragged me over here as he made a mad dash for the cafeteria and I’m glad he did. This place got packed! The lines were so long that they managed to spread to outside of the cafeteria, and there were so little seats that students actually stood along the walls!"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 88: expected statement.
        "We were lucky enough to get a seat, however, so that’s a victory there. I’m sure this is simply the result of people’s schedules getting sorted out and it's only temporary… Right?"
                                                                                                                                                                                             ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 89: expected statement.
        m "Sorry you had to deal with that, I heard that Ms. Faust was terrible, but I didn’t know it was THIS bad!"
                                                                                                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 90: expected statement.
        w "I think that was probably the worst experience I had with a teacher, ever!"
                                                                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 91: expected statement.
        m "And trust me, honey, it gets worse."
                                               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 92: expected statement.
        "Probably noticing my gloominess, he quickly added on to that statement"
                                                                                ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 93: expected statement.
        m "But maybe it wouldn’t be so bad for you, y’know? I mean there’s still the rest of the day and I doubt you’re gonna have the same experiences I have, so I’m sure you’ll be fine."
                                                                                                                                                                                            ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 94: expected statement.
        m "…"
             ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 95: expected statement.
        m "Anyways, have you considered joining any clubs yet?"
                                                               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 96: expected statement.
        w "No, not yet, what kind of clubs are there?"
                                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 97: expected statement.
        m "Well, since this is an art and preparatory school, it has the standard stuff: National Art Honors Society, Robotics, Theatre, Orchestra, Chorus, Math Club, community service, etc."
                                                                                                                                                                                               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 98: expected statement.
        m "I personally, am part of the Occult Club."
                                                     ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 99: expected statement.
        w "Of course you are."
                              ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 100: expected statement.
        m "I’m sure Master Camio would be happy to have a new member in our circle."
                                                                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 101: expected statement.
        "He smiled creepily at me."
                                   ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 102: expected statement.
        w "Yeah… No."
                     ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 103: expected statement.
        m "Keheh… I’m just messin’ with ya."
                                            ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 104: expected statement.
        "Well, there did happen to be a club that I had interest in. I saw the flier for it as Morgan and I were running to get her."
                                                                                                                                     ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 105: expected statement.
        " “Video Game Design Club” It said, “Ever wanted to make your own game? Well here’s your chance! Team up with the school’s best artist, composers, writers, and coders to make your dream come true! Auditions now!” "
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 106: expected statement.
        "Although video games never really had an influence on my life, I did do a lot of drawing and I was considered a pretty good artist back in my old school, so I’m sure it wouldn’t hurt to try out after school for the art department, even if it did seem pretty weird to hold auditions for a club that was probably pretty unpopular."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 107: expected statement.
        w "Well… I think the video ga-"
                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 108: expected statement.
        m "I’m gonna have to cut you off right there. The bell is about to ring in two minutes, so if you value your life, I suggest heading to your next class right now."
                                                                                                                                                                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 109: expected statement.
        "And with that he sprinted away, dodging and navigating through students with surprising ease. Welp, I guess I can always tell him tomorrow on the bus!"
                                                                                                                                                                ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 110: expected statement.
        "The day wasn’t that bad from that point on. Since it was the first day, there wasn’t a lot of work to do, so most of class time was spent going over classroom rules and procedures."
                                                                                                                                                                                              ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 111: expected statement.
        "I was still relieved when it was finally time for everyone to go home for the day. I ran up the steps fishing my usb filled with my art from my backpack, wanting to be early and prepared for the auditions so I can get it over with faster and go home."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 112: expected statement.
        "I stopped in front of room 233B, where the flier said the club room was. I took a second to relax and gain some composure before actually going in. This was so exciting! The butterflies in my tummy were absolutely restless, who knows what might go down at this audition?"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 113: expected statement.
        "Who knows, maybe I get in and manage to play a part in what happens to be the next new hit indie game! Or maybe my artistic prowess gets recognized by some big name corporation or celebrity and I make it big! Whatever happens here, I have a feeling it’s going to affect me in some big way!"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 114: expected statement.
        w "Feeling as ready as I could possibly be, I grabbed the doorknob and wrenched the door open."
                                                                                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 115: expected statement.
        w "It was absolute chaos."
                                  ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 116: expected statement.
        "Chapter 1 End"
                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 117: expected statement.
        "Chapter 2 Start"
                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 118: expected statement.
        "The moment I entered the room I could tell this wasn’t any ordinary club filled with Sintendo-obsessed nerds."
                                                                                                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 119: expected statement.
        c "Oh! I have an idea! Let's make a dating sim where you date a French Toast!....wait a second..."
                                                                                                          ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 120: expected statement.
       "Wait a minute...Was that… Cube?"
                                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 121: expected statement.
        b "What about a game where you have to summon demons to kill all your enemies!"
                                                                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 122: expected statement.
       "Breijo is in here too?! Oh no, was THIS the totally exclusive club that Morgan told me those kids are in?! Not only will I fail this audition, but I’m going to embarrass myself in front of the most popular people in school! I don’t know if these people are nice or anything!"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 123: expected statement.
        le "Yo, how about a rhythm game that actually teaches you how to play guitar? It would be sick!"
                                                                                                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 124: expected statement.
       "Gah! How can only 9 people cause such a commotion?!"
                                                            ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 125: expected statement.
        jo " Or maybe a bullet hell game where you have to dodge bullet seeds shot at you by mutant plants!"
                                                                                                            ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 126: expected statement.
        co "LETS MAKE A PLATFORMER GAME WHERE YOU HAVE TO COLLECT EVERY CAT IN THE WORLD!"
                                                                                          ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 127: expected statement.
        ca "Maybe a first-person shooter that helps you learn japanese by having you type in the translation of words in order to shoot?"
                                                                                                                                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 128: expected statement.
        "SO MANY PEOPLE TALKING ABOUT PROJECTS I CAN'T EVEN MONOLOGUE MYSELF!"
                                                                              ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 129: expected statement.
        n "GUYYYYYYYYYYYYYYS."
                              ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 130: expected statement.
        "Seemingly out of nowhere, a girl with short curly hair yelled out, standing on top of a chair managing to get everyone to quiet down. The other 9 people (i had just noticed the rather short fellow with glasses)in the room finally noticed me,their eyes turning the butterflies in my stomach into hundreds of busy bees." 
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 132: expected statement.
       "No, no I can’t be like this! Even if others have failed before me, who said it was absolutely guaranteed that I would too? The people at my old school thought my art was good and it seems like this club is DESPERATE for people, I’m sure I can get in! Then again…"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 133: expected statement.
        ju "Hey, are you alright?"
                                  ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 134: expected statement.
        w "OH! Oh, yeah, yeah I’m alright sorry I… uh…"
                                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 135: expected statement.
        w "I came here to audition!"
                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 136: expected statement.
       "Smooth."
                ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 137: expected statement.
        ju "Oh, awesome! We don’t really get a lot of people who come to try out. So, what do you want to audition for?"
                                                                                                                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 138: expected statement.
        w "Uh, art!"
                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 139: expected statement.
        ju "Now before we start, I want to know: Do you like video games?"
                                                                          ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 141: expected statement.
        ju "Jimmy and Cube, can you take over from here?"
                                                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 142: expected statement.
        j "Alright!"
                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 143: expected statement.
        c "Sure."
                 ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 144: expected statement.
        j "Alright, kid, now before we get to looking at the art you should have brought, I want you to tell me a bit about your work ethic. How you work in groups, how dedicated you are to work and projects, and crap like that."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 145: expected statement.
        c "We also need to know your artistic background: When you started drawing, what and how you usually draw, what mediums you have used…"
                                                                                                                                               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 149: expected statement.
        j "Well, everything seems to be in order here…"
                                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 150: expected statement.
        c "There could be more realism, in my opinion."
                                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 151: expected statement.
        j "Looks like you’re in, kid! Congrats!"
                                                ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 152: expected statement.
        w "What?! REALLY?!"
                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 153: expected statement.
        w "Wow, I-I’m so relieved! I didn’t think I would get in, my friend told me that this was a super hard club to get into!"
                                                                                                                                 ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 154: expected statement.
        ju "That’s because we only pick the best of the best. If you are good at what you do but not serious about working, or serious but not good at what you do, you can’t get in. If you are both serious and good at what you do, then you’re allowed in."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 160: expected statement.
        c "”Tournay” is it? “Tornien?””tournied?”"
                                                  ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 161: expected statement.
        w "You know what just call me Tori"
                                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 162: expected statement.
        c "Anyways, Hello Tori! I am Cube!"
                                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 163: expected statement.
        ca "Hello Tournai!~ I am Carla! But you can also call me Car."
                                                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 164: expected statement.
        n "Hello Tour…Tori! I am Nicole."
                                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 165: expected statement.
        b "Who are you again? It doesn’t matter, my name is Breijo."
                                                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 166: expected statement.
        co "Sup Tournai, I am connor, don’t be surprised if I bite you time to time."
                                                                                     ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 167: expected statement.
        "this guy seems to be blushing, I wonder what’s up with him?"
                                                                     ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 168: expected statement.
        jo "O-oh! Hello! My name is Jose! I hope we get along! Hehe."
                                                                     ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 169: expected statement.
        "That was strange…"
                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 170: expected statement.
        s "Oh uh, hello pleasant. I am Security"
                                                ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 171: expected statement.
        le "Ayy Lmao, I am Leo, I hope you like maymays"
                                                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 172: expected statement.
        w "uh…excuse me?"
                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 173: expected statement.
        w "*mumbles* what are maymays…?"
                                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 174: expected statement.
        ju "Is that everyone? Alright, so my name is Juan, I am your president. I hope you have fun in the video game design club."
                                                                                                                                   ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 175: expected statement.
        ju "And now, is the big choice of the project."
                                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 176: expected statement.
        "Everyone is eager for the big reveal, including me, so many ideas to think from!"
                                                                                          ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 177: expected statement.
        ju "The game we are making…"
                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 178: expected statement.
        ju "Is a zombie survival game."
                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 179: expected statement.
        w "Zombie…Survival?"
                            ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 180: expected statement.
        "Everyone responded the same way as me."
                                                ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 181: expected statement.
        ju "Yes, the whole city is infested with zombies and it up to each character that we make to save the city."
                                                                                                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 182: expected statement.
        ju "As for the characters…well, that’s all for you to decide! So let’s think of the playable characters! Right Now!"
                                                                                                                            ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 183: expected statement.
        w "I have an idea!"
                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 184: expected statement.
        "Everyone then starts to stare"
                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 185: expected statement.
        w "Um…well, how about someone who just moved to the city. And now they have to fend them off? And they are pretty normal and average."
                                                                                                                                              ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 186: expected statement.
        ju "I like that idea, they could be the main character and other people team up with them!"
                                                                                                   ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 187: expected statement.
        ca "Oh! I got one! Maybe they team up with a robot who is supposed to counter the zombie threat."
                                                                                                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 188: expected statement.
        le "I got it, a fun loving guy who doesn’t really seem to take the whole apocalypse thing seriously."
                                                                                                             ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 189: expected statement.
        j "Someone who is perfect at everything, and was definitely prepared for the whole apocalypse."
                                                                                                       ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 190: expected statement.
        c "How about someone who knows about the zombies and maybe a cure for them."
                                                                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 191: expected statement.
        b "Lol, screw that, someone who kills all of them relentlessly without caring who and what they are."
                                                                                                             ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 192: expected statement.
        n "Someone is more about defense rather than offense and protects the main character."
                                                                                              ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 193: expected statement.
        co "Someone who can BITE all their enemies and not get infected, they are practically an animal! And do many attacks similar to an animal."
                                                                                                                                                   ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 194: expected statement.
        s "Someone who is in the and does air strikes rather than on land"
                                                                          ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 195: expected statement.
        jo "Someone who uses a sword and is very eager and confident"
                                                                     ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 196: expected statement.
        ju "Alright, perfect, we got all our characters for the game! We will start working tomorrow. Good work everyone!"
                                                                                                                          ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 197: expected statement.
        "Everyone started to leave one by one, I was the last one to go."
                                                                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 198: expected statement.
        ju "Wait, Tournai!"
                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 199: expected statement.
        w "Hm?"
               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 200: expected statement.
        ju "I just want to say…I hope you have fun in this club. I can tell you will be a useful person in this club in the future."
                                                                                                                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 201: expected statement.
        "My eyes opened and I gave a smile"
                                           ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 202: expected statement.
        w "Thank you Juan, I’m excited as well for what comes in this club. I’m happy to be working with you! "
                                                                                                               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 203: expected statement.
        "And that was the first day of the Video Game Design Club."
                                                                   ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 204: expected statement.
        z "Hey! Tournai!"
                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 205: expected statement.
        "I turned around, it was Morgan!"
                                         ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 206: expected statement.
        m "So how was your first day at the club?"
                                                  ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 207: expected statement.
        w "It went really well! We are making a zombie survival game."
                                                                      ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 208: expected statement.
        m "Now THAT’S something I could get into."
                                                  ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 209: expected statement.
        m "And…who interested you the most?"
                                            ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 210: expected statement.
        "…This feels very important"
                                    ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 211: expected statement.
        "…Who did interest me the most?"
                                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 212: expected statement.
        menu:
        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 213: expected statement.
           "Jimmy":
                  ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 214: expected statement.
               jump jimmy
               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 215: expected statement.
           "Cube":
                 ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 216: expected statement.
               jump cube
               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 217: expected statement.
           "Breijo":
                   ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 218: expected statement.
               jump briejo
               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 219: expected statement.
           "Nicole":
                   ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 220: expected statement.
               jump nicole
               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 221: expected statement.
           "Jose":
                 ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 222: expected statement.
               jump jose
               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 223: expected statement.
           "Security":
                     ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 224: expected statement.
               jump security
               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 225: expected statement.
           "Connor":
                   ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 226: expected statement.
               jump connor
               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 227: expected statement.
           "Leo":
                ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 228: expected statement.
               jump leo
               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 229: expected statement.
           "Carla":
                  ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 230: expected statement.
               jump carla
               ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 231: expected statement.
        "Chapter 2 End."
                        ^

File "game/script.rpy", line 232: expected statement.
        
        ^

Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 6.99.10.1227
I'm honestly getting tired of this. every time I paste the script this has happened and I still can't find out what expected statement means at this point and I'm following all what its telling me. someone told me it was fine and then when I went back it was indentation. I'm losing hope at this point and I need help. The whole script has an expected statement

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define w = Character('Tournai',color="#b2b200")
define m = Character('Morgan', color="#00FF00")
define t = Character('Ms.Faust', color="#3CB371")
define z = Character('???', color="#00FF00")
define y = Character('Mom', color="#FFC0CB")
define q = Character('Student', color="#FFFFFF")
define c = Character('Cube', color="#00e5e5")
define b = Character('Breijo', color="#ffff00")
define j = Character('Jimmy', color="#ff0000")
define ju = Character('Juan', color="#7f1ae5")
define jo = Character('Jose', color="#006600")
define n = Character('Nicole', color= "#FFFFFF")
define s = Character('Security', color="#e50000")
define ca = Character('Carla', color= "#FFFFFF")
define le = Character('Leo', color= "#FFFFFF")
define co = Character('Connor', color="#004c00")

# The game starts here.
label start:

    "August 22, the first day of school."
    "None of this feels real, honestly."
     "I mean, I just moved here all the way from Belgium"
    "and now I'm starting sophomore year in one of the best schools in the world!"
    "I just know that from this day forth, my life will completel-"
    "Wait."
    "IS THAT THE TIME? SHIT I HAVE TO GET DRESSED"
    "I was so into my monologue I forgot what time it was!"
    "*As I am getting ready, the screen is black*"
    "Except for the textbox of me saying shit during it."
    y "Good morning swee-"
    w "LOVE YOU THANK YOU BYE!!"
    "*cg of her running with a waffle in her mouth*"
    w "IS THAT THE BUS? CRAP!"
    "Eventually, I managed to get the bus to stop for me. Not without the bus driver scolding me, of course, with words I wouldn’t dare repeat."
    "When I got on, I noticed that it was packed to the brim.   As I scanned the rows with the bus driver heckling me to sit down a hand at the very back waved at me to come over."
    "When I got back there, I saw a tired looking student with green hair looking out the window."
    "Pretty edgy."
    "I took my seat next to them as they turned to me."
    m "You’re new here aren’t you?"
    w "Oh! Yeah, I’m a transfer student from Belgium!"
    m "You excited?"
    w "Yeah!"
    m "Bet’ you’re gonna have a good year?"
    w "Mhm!"
    "He laughed in my face."
    m "Ha, well, welcome to Hell."
    "He turned back to the window, leaving me awkwardly sitting there in silence."
    "Someone needs to cheer up…"
    w "Well,I’m Tournai!"
    "Still in his current position, he reached out a hand which I readily took, and we shook hands. I noticed his black finger nails and fingerless gloves."
    "Total edgelord"
    m "Morgan."
    w "So… How is it like there?"
    m "Well, I mean, it’s good if ya wanna do art or go to some ivy league school. The experience itself is not so great to be honest, but I’m probably asking for it."
    "I took into account everything I noticed about Morgan: Green hair, tired eyes with eyeliner, fingerless gloves, black nail polish, and a stone-cold face, not to mention pretty chubby. I would imagine he wouldn’t have the best social experience at school."
    "Hopefully, he just meant that school was hard. If there was a bullying problem at school no doubt I would get targeted for being a foreign transfer student!"
    m "But I’m sure you’ll be alright…"
    "Eventually, we did get to school."
    "*Shows Picture of the School*"
   w "Wow, so this is Asagohan Academy..."
    "The large yellow and red building loomed over us sending a shiver down my spine by how intimidating the size was. The front of the school had neatly trimmed trees with bright yellow leaves and hedges lining the surprisingly very white paved walkways."
    "It was teeming with life, students sitting at the benches or on the freshly mowed grass laughing and sharing what fun things they did over the summer. I turned to with the thought of asking him about how his summer break was when suddenly…"
    q "HEY IT’S THEM!"
    "All conversation seemed to cease when everyone turned to see what was going on. I turned my head too and noticed that practically everyone who was once sitting down was now standing in a crowd surrounding a group of people."
    "Students were either watching or trying with some succeeding in talking to them. I wonder what the big deal is?"
    w "What’s going on? Who are they?"
    m "Oh, only the most popular people at school. Insert descriptions of all members here."
    "With all their diverse appearances and personalities, they all seemed like a cast of characters in some high school movie or video game."
    "What if this really was some kind of movie or video game, starring me as the main protagonist, hoping to join into their ranks in popularity which I do after helping them in some way, or falling in love with one of them, experiencing an emotional roller coaster from beginning to end."
    "But in all honestly, I was probably just another extra walking around in the background of their no doubt perfect lives. I tuned back in to Morgan who was still talking about them."
    m "They’re all in the same club too but it's like, super hard to get into."
    w "Ooooo, sounds prestigious! What kind of club is it?"
    m "It’s nothing special really it’s just a –"
    "He was cut off by the school bell ringing, signaling not just for everyone to get inside and into class but that summer break was officially over. Everyone including the group of popular kids got up and started heading into the school in droves."
    "Thankfully, it turned out I had the same homeroom as Morgan so I just followed him there. I was considering asking Morgan to finish telling me about the club those mysterious popular kids were in, but the hallway was already too loud with the chatting and shouting of teenagers, not to mention hard to move around, I decided to keep it to myself."
    "It was probably for the best anyways, I mean, what was the point in having interest in a club I couldn’t possibly get into? It was probably going to be pretty boring anyways."
    w "Even if I’m not the protagonist of some tropey piece of American media, from this day forth my life will completely change, and I can say that at least! I can try new things, make new friends, breathe new air! This was a new chapter, an exciting adventure, a brand ne-"
    w "I was taken out of my thoughts when we're finally arrived at the door to homeroom: 218C. I was nearly out of breath once we got there! We had to walk to pretty much the other end of the school, and that together with all our navigating and wedging through people just trying to get here, it was enough exercise to not have to do PE for a year! Well, I’m sure that at least the teachers were nice!"
    t "Can you headaches just shut up for a minute?!"
    t "Alright, let’s see here… Ah it looks like we have a new student."
    t "Whatsherface! Get your butt up here and introduce yourself! And you better be sharp about it!"
    "I was wrong."
    w "Hello, I'm Tournai! I moved here from Belgium and I'm ha-"
    t "Alright that's enough dear now everyone turn to page 75 in your textbook and begin reading"
    "Well… That sucked. Looks like this school isn't all sunshine and lollipops as I had thought."
    "Fast forward later, we were now at lunch. Morgan practically dragged me over here as he made a mad dash for the cafeteria and I’m glad he did. This place got packed! The lines were so long that they managed to spread to outside of the cafeteria, and there were so little seats that students actually stood along the walls!"
    "We were lucky enough to get a seat, however, so that’s a victory there. I’m sure this is simply the result of people’s schedules getting sorted out and it's only temporary… Right?"
    m "Sorry you had to deal with that, I heard that Ms. Faust was terrible, but I didn’t know it was THIS bad!"
    w "I think that was probably the worst experience I had with a teacher, ever!"
    m "And trust me, honey, it gets worse."
    "Probably noticing my gloominess, he quickly added on to that statement"
    m "But maybe it wouldn’t be so bad for you, y’know? I mean there’s still the rest of the day and I doubt you’re gonna have the same experiences I have, so I’m sure you’ll be fine."
    m "…"
    m "Anyways, have you considered joining any clubs yet?"
    w "No, not yet, what kind of clubs are there?"
    m "Well, since this is an art and preparatory school, it has the standard stuff: National Art Honors Society, Robotics, Theatre, Orchestra, Chorus, Math Club, community service, etc."
    m "I personally, am part of the Occult Club."
    w "Of course you are."
    m "I’m sure Master Camio would be happy to have a new member in our circle."
    "He smiled creepily at me."
    w "Yeah… No."
    m "Keheh… I’m just messin’ with ya."
    "Well, there did happen to be a club that I had interest in. I saw the flier for it as Morgan and I were running to get her."
    " “Video Game Design Club” It said, “Ever wanted to make your own game? Well here’s your chance! Team up with the school’s best artist, composers, writers, and coders to make your dream come true! Auditions now!” "
    "Although video games never really had an influence on my life, I did do a lot of drawing and I was considered a pretty good artist back in my old school, so I’m sure it wouldn’t hurt to try out after school for the art department, even if it did seem pretty weird to hold auditions for a club that was probably pretty unpopular."
    w "Well… I think the video ga-"
    m "I’m gonna have to cut you off right there. The bell is about to ring in two minutes, so if you value your life, I suggest heading to your next class right now."
    "And with that he sprinted away, dodging and navigating through students with surprising ease. Welp, I guess I can always tell him tomorrow on the bus!"
    "The day wasn’t that bad from that point on. Since it was the first day, there wasn’t a lot of work to do, so most of class time was spent going over classroom rules and procedures."
    "I was still relieved when it was finally time for everyone to go home for the day. I ran up the steps fishing my usb filled with my art from my backpack, wanting to be early and prepared for the auditions so I can get it over with faster and go home."
    "I stopped in front of room 233B, where the flier said the club room was. I took a second to relax and gain some composure before actually going in. This was so exciting! The butterflies in my tummy were absolutely restless, who knows what might go down at this audition?"
    "Who knows, maybe I get in and manage to play a part in what happens to be the next new hit indie game! Or maybe my artistic prowess gets recognized by some big name corporation or celebrity and I make it big! Whatever happens here, I have a feeling it’s going to affect me in some big way!"
    w "Feeling as ready as I could possibly be, I grabbed the doorknob and wrenched the door open."
    w "It was absolute chaos."
    "Chapter 1 End"
    "Chapter 2 Start"
    "The moment I entered the room I could tell this wasn’t any ordinary club filled with Sintendo-obsessed nerds."
    c "Oh! I have an idea! Let's make a dating sim where you date a French Toast!....wait a second..."
   "Wait a minute...Was that… Cube?"
    b "What about a game where you have to summon demons to kill all your enemies!"
   "Breijo is in here too?! Oh no, was THIS the totally exclusive club that Morgan told me those kids are in?! Not only will I fail this audition, but I’m going to embarrass myself in front of the most popular people in school! I don’t know if these people are nice or anything!"
    le "Yo, how about a rhythm game that actually teaches you how to play guitar? It would be sick!"
   "Gah! How can only 9 people cause such a commotion?!"
    jo " Or maybe a bullet hell game where you have to dodge bullet seeds shot at you by mutant plants!"
    co "LETS MAKE A PLATFORMER GAME WHERE YOU HAVE TO COLLECT EVERY CAT IN THE WORLD!"
    ca "Maybe a first-person shooter that helps you learn japanese by having you type in the translation of words in order to shoot?"
    "SO MANY PEOPLE TALKING ABOUT PROJECTS I CAN'T EVEN MONOLOGUE MYSELF!"
    n "GUYYYYYYYYYYYYYYS."
    "Seemingly out of nowhere, a girl with short curly hair yelled out, standing on top of a chair managing to get everyone to quiet down. The other 9 people (i had just noticed the rather short fellow with glasses)in the room finally noticed me,their eyes turning the butterflies in my stomach into hundreds of busy bees." 
    "I was frozen. I wasn’t sure I wanted to do this anymore. What if they don’t like my art? What if they don’t like me?!"
   "No, no I can’t be like this! Even if others have failed before me, who said it was absolutely guaranteed that I would too? The people at my old school thought my art was good and it seems like this club is DESPERATE for people, I’m sure I can get in! Then again…"
    ju "Hey, are you alright?"
    w "OH! Oh, yeah, yeah I’m alright sorry I… uh…"
    w "I came here to audition!"
   "Smooth."
    ju "Oh, awesome! We don’t really get a lot of people who come to try out. So, what do you want to audition for?"
    w "Uh, art!"
    ju "Now before we start, I want to know: Do you like video games?"
    "(Choices here: Yes and no. “Yes” leads to Juan saying “Okay, good, now let’s get started, shall we?”, “No” leads to the game crashing.)"
    ju "Jimmy and Cube, can you take over from here?"
    j "Alright!"
    c "Sure."
    j "Alright, kid, now before we get to looking at the art you should have brought, I want you to tell me a bit about your work ethic. How you work in groups, how dedicated you are to work and projects, and crap like that."
    c "We also need to know your artistic background: When you started drawing, what and how you usually draw, what mediums you have used…"
    "Jeez, I thought this was an audition not an interrogation! Despite how perfect Jimmy was described to be, at the moment she looked awfully threatening, her sweet smile having been replaced with a stern face."
    "Cube didn’t exactly help ease the pressure either, it felt like he was judging even the smallest of my movements with those eyes. Together, it felt like they had some kind of power over me. It seemed as though they knew more about me than I knew about myself, holding satisfied yet unimpressed expressions as if they had heard what I said all before."
    "I let out a sigh of relief once the interview was over and they finally moved onto my flash drive full of both traditional and digital art from the past year."
    j "Well, everything seems to be in order here…"
    c "There could be more realism, in my opinion."
    j "Looks like you’re in, kid! Congrats!"
    w "What?! REALLY?!"
    w "Wow, I-I’m so relieved! I didn’t think I would get in, my friend told me that this was a super hard club to get into!"
    ju "That’s because we only pick the best of the best. If you are good at what you do but not serious about working, or serious but not good at what you do, you can’t get in. If you are both serious and good at what you do, then you’re allowed in."
    "The club wasn’t always like this, two years ago was when we decided to kick out all the people just loathing around and manage everything that happened in the club a lot better."
    j "Oh hey,by the way, I didn’t get your name."
    w "Oh, right, it’s Tournai Aalders."
    j "Tournai, huh? Well, it’s nice to have ya onboard, Tournai! I’m sure you’ll be fine!"
    j "I’m Jimmy, by the way, and I don’t mean to sound narcissistic or anything, but I’m pretty good at art and coming up with ideas, so don’t be afraid to ask me for help!"
    c "”Tournay” is it? “Tornien?””tournied?”"
    w "You know what just call me Tori"
    c "Anyways, Hello Tori! I am Cube!"
    ca "Hello Tournai!~ I am Carla! But you can also call me Car."
    n "Hello Tour…Tori! I am Nicole."
    b "Who are you again? It doesn’t matter, my name is Breijo."
    co "Sup Tournai, I am connor, don’t be surprised if I bite you time to time."
    "this guy seems to be blushing, I wonder what’s up with him?"
    jo "O-oh! Hello! My name is Jose! I hope we get along! Hehe."
    "That was strange…"
    s "Oh uh, hello pleasant. I am Security"
    le "Ayy Lmao, I am Leo, I hope you like maymays"
    w "uh…excuse me?"
    w "*mumbles* what are maymays…?"
    ju "Is that everyone? Alright, so my name is Juan, I am your president. I hope you have fun in the video game design club."
    ju "And now, is the big choice of the project."
    "Everyone is eager for the big reveal, including me, so many ideas to think from!"
    ju "The game we are making…"
    ju "Is a zombie survival game."
    w "Zombie…Survival?"
    "Everyone responded the same way as me."
    ju "Yes, the whole city is infested with zombies and it up to each character that we make to save the city."
    ju "As for the characters…well, that’s all for you to decide! So let’s think of the playable characters! Right Now!"
    w "I have an idea!"
    "Everyone then starts to stare"
    w "Um…well, how about someone who just moved to the city. And now they have to fend them off? And they are pretty normal and average."
    ju "I like that idea, they could be the main character and other people team up with them!"
    ca "Oh! I got one! Maybe they team up with a robot who is supposed to counter the zombie threat."
    le "I got it, a fun loving guy who doesn’t really seem to take the whole apocalypse thing seriously."
    j "Someone who is perfect at everything, and was definitely prepared for the whole apocalypse."
    c "How about someone who knows about the zombies and maybe a cure for them."
    b "Lol, screw that, someone who kills all of them relentlessly without caring who and what they are."
    n "Someone is more about defense rather than offense and protects the main character."
    co "Someone who can BITE all their enemies and not get infected, they are practically an animal! And do many attacks similar to an animal."
    s "Someone who is in the and does air strikes rather than on land"
    jo "Someone who uses a sword and is very eager and confident"
    ju "Alright, perfect, we got all our characters for the game! We will start working tomorrow. Good work everyone!"
    "Everyone started to leave one by one, I was the last one to go."
    ju "Wait, Tournai!"
    w "Hm?"
    ju "I just want to say…I hope you have fun in this club. I can tell you will be a useful person in this club in the future."
    "My eyes opened and I gave a smile"
    w "Thank you Juan, I’m excited as well for what comes in this club. I’m happy to be working with you! "
    "And that was the first day of the Video Game Design Club."
    z "Hey! Tournai!"
    "I turned around, it was Morgan!"
    m "So how was your first day at the club?"
    w "It went really well! We are making a zombie survival game."
    m "Now THAT’S something I could get into."
    m "And…who interested you the most?"
    "…This feels very important"
    "…Who did interest me the most?"
    menu:
       "Jimmy":
           jump jimmy
       "Cube":
           jump cube
       "Breijo":
           jump briejo
       "Nicole":
           jump nicole
       "Jose":
           jump jose
       "Security":
           jump security
       "Connor":
           jump connor
       "Leo":
           jump leo
       "Carla":
           jump carla
    "Chapter 2 End."
    


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Re: Oh Boy! Expected Statements!

#2 Post by Donmai » Mon May 16, 2016 9:11 pm

Okay, I created a fresh new project and pasted your script there. There were many indentation problems (some lines were indented with only three spaces). After indenting all lines correctly, the script run without problems. No 'expected statement' errors at all. Of course I received error messages at the menu, because there are no labels to jump to in this part of the script. I'm attaching the script with the correct indentation.
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Re: Oh Boy! Expected Statements!

#3 Post by TheBrightCube » Mon May 16, 2016 9:15 pm

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Re: Oh Boy! Expected Statements!

#4 Post by Onishion » Mon May 16, 2016 11:44 pm

A simple tip, when you get an "expected statement" error, the error typically has nothing to do with that line itself. What it usually means is that you mis-indented or were missing a ":" or something on a line above it, which then causes every line after that to not be what Renpy was expecting to find there.

The easiest way to troubleshoot something like this, is highlight much of it, and hit "ctrl-1" to comment it all out. Then uncomment out bits at a time and see if they work on their own, work your way down or up the chain until the errors start happening, then you know where to look. In cases like this though, it's usually the line one or two before the line throwing errors,

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Re: Oh Boy! Expected Statements!

#5 Post by xela » Tue May 17, 2016 4:29 am

TheBrightCube wrote:SciTE
I am not familiar with this one, you prolly want something that auto-indents and makes it know that you forgot/messed up indents.
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