[WIP] Snow White & Rose Red [Fairytale GxB]

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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#61 Post by Red Lilies » Fri Aug 20, 2010 2:10 am

Wow, the background looks amazing. Also, the fact that the text appears on a book is super awesome. Even more excited for this game now. :D
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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#62 Post by DragoonHP » Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:40 am

Well... I haven't been a ideal staff by ignoring the game thread but I will try to change it now.

As everyone had said the arts looks amazing and I can assure the others that Starling writing can give her own art a run for its money.

Kaorien background art looks so... real.

So to wrap it up, keep the good work on.

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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#63 Post by Starling » Thu Aug 26, 2010 3:30 am

@Red Lilies: I'm very happy to have her, and thank you about the book

@DragoonHP: I'm actually quite surprised by this :D XD Thank you for the encouragement good sir, I shall indeed try to live up to your words *salutes*

As an update for everyone, if everything goes well Wolf should be finished sometime tomorrow :D Which gets my hardest sprites out of the way and finished.
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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#64 Post by Doggy Nino » Thu Aug 26, 2010 10:39 pm

Wahh! The mother is very beautiful! Good job Starling! She really is gorgeous~
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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#65 Post by Starling » Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:05 pm

So wolves have frustratingly colorful coats that make them a lot longer to color than should be allowed.

With that out of the way.

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A mysterious wolf, will you choose him? :)
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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#67 Post by sayuri » Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:58 pm

To be totally honest, I thought that the Bear and Wolf would be anthropomorphic characters. But that wouldn't really be sticking to the story. It's just I'm not sure how many people will go for an animal ~_~. Conflict, conflict.

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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#68 Post by Starling » Fri Aug 27, 2010 7:06 pm

@Sayuri: I know exactly what you mean.
When I first posted this I was highly debating spoiling the main secret it so that people would know that it isn't going to be "bestiality". I didn't get many people going: wait you're going to date ANIMALS? So I kept it the way I have it now without spoiling it. In the game itself I try very hard to make the love in the game be very: If only you were human I would love you, but you're an animal so you're only my friend.

The whole thing is pretty frustrating though.
I don't think I could every make them anthro, however, it's just such a different feeling than what I am going for. I just hope that people don't take it as EW BESTIALITY.
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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#69 Post by sayuri » Fri Aug 27, 2010 7:30 pm

Starling wrote:@Sayuri: I know exactly what you mean.
When I first posted this I was highly debating spoiling the main secret it so that people would know that it isn't going to be "bestiality". I didn't get many people going: wait you're going to date ANIMALS? So I kept it the way I have it now without spoiling it. In the game itself I try very hard to make the love in the game be very: If only you were human I would love you, but you're an animal so you're only my friend.

The whole thing is pretty frustrating though.
I don't think I could every make them anthro, however, it's just such a different feeling than what I am going for. I just hope that people don't take it as EW BESTIALITY.
It could work, a la Disney's Beauty and the Beast. The Beast is definitely no bishonen, lol. Still, he's a very lovable character and, I think, he's the best romantic interest out of all the Disney movies.

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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#70 Post by Qookies » Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:55 am

The Wolf is... cute... OMG! The Wolf is very well drawn!!!!!!!!!!

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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#71 Post by Aleema » Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:03 pm

Starling wrote:A mysterious wolf, will you choose him? :)
No.


Wait, yes.

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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#72 Post by Starling » Fri Nov 19, 2010 2:04 am

So the wonderful land of college put my poor little VN on temporary hiatus, but I've got winter break starting soon so back to working on it :D

The break was actually good as now I can look back on the story and as of now I'm probably going to nix the prologue because it's noticeably weaker writing (that I'm not sure I can fix) and it slows down the pace, is full of clunky exposition and many retellings of the fairytale don't include this part anyway.

I'm also planning to focus on story and coding for a while, and not worry about the art.

Sorry for the hiatus <3 But I'm back on track :D
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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#73 Post by Aleema » Fri Nov 19, 2010 3:33 pm

I'll be here for coding help. :3

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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#74 Post by Starling » Sat Nov 20, 2010 2:18 am

Aleema wrote:I'll be here for coding help. :3
Thank you muchly <3 I'll definitely be bothering you when I start putting that main gameplay together.
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Re: [WIP] Snow White & Rose Red

#75 Post by Elemental-Butterfly » Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:19 pm

sayuri wrote:
Starling wrote:@Sayuri: I know exactly what you mean.
When I first posted this I was highly debating spoiling the main secret it so that people would know that it isn't going to be "bestiality". I didn't get many people going: wait you're going to date ANIMALS? So I kept it the way I have it now without spoiling it. In the game itself I try very hard to make the love in the game be very: If only you were human I would love you, but you're an animal so you're only my friend.

The whole thing is pretty frustrating though.
I don't think I could every make them anthro, however, it's just such a different feeling than what I am going for. I just hope that people don't take it as EW BESTIALITY.
It could work, a la Disney's Beauty and the Beast. The Beast is definitely no bishonen, lol. Still, he's a very lovable character and, I think, he's the best romantic interest out of all the Disney movies.
sometimes i wish that disney characters had anime lips too.

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