Just a brief summary; the story will be based on a young mother, who when showered with Mother Day's gifts from her daughter, remembered her past with her own mother. Slice of life with a slight twist. This will probably be around 10-15 minutes read, around 4000 words.
Story:
Nellie
Art:
Sprite by Blue Forest
Background graphic by Kyu Kyu Kyu no Q no Q; Mao Space
Customising and modifying by Nellie
Theme Songs
Opening Song
Love Found Me by Susan Krauter
Ending Song
Love Like No Other by Bob Forbes
Sound Effects
Incomplete list currently
Beta readers
broken_angel
TJ
That's chibi me!
Regards,
Nellie
[EDIT - 22/10/2010]
[EDIT - 24/10/2010]
So I played around with photoshop and Pinnacle Studio and made an opening video... Noob video from a noob maker... Yay!
And... broken_angel has finished beta reading my script! So I'll be going ahead and trying to get the KN done! Weee~
[EDIT - 26/10/2010]
Version 1 is up!! Hurray for my very very very first KN albeit it being in a total mess! FEEDBACK PLEASE! I'll love you for it xD
Statistics:
The game contains 250 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 3,248 words,
for an average of 13.0 words per screen.
The game contains 0 menus.
To do list:
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7. Responding to feedback and debugging
8. Learn from mistakes
9. Learn to make a better opening/intro. (And closing if necessary)
10. ... Love myself for taking the first step in making a VN! xD
EDIT 07/1/2010
New and finalised version should be up soon (a few days?)... It will not be perfect, but I don't think I will work on it any time soon. Thanks for all your support! =D
Specific Feedbacks Requested:
2. Is my story writing style too confusing (ie does my English s*ck)
3. Would you be interested to read of my stories (KN or VN)
*cheers*
Download Links
Linux - http://www.mediafire.com/?7u8jw5taj8wt2lx
Mac - http://www.mediafire.com/?5dn58j19qqqfakm
Wins - http://www.mediafire.com/?mvjuu48ym9q0rhb