[WIP] Snow White & Rose Red [Fairytale GxB]
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Wow, the background looks amazing. Also, the fact that the text appears on a book is super awesome. Even more excited for this game now.
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Well... I haven't been a ideal staff by ignoring the game thread but I will try to change it now.
As everyone had said the arts looks amazing and I can assure the others that Starling writing can give her own art a run for its money.
Kaorien background art looks so... real.
So to wrap it up, keep the good work on.
As everyone had said the arts looks amazing and I can assure the others that Starling writing can give her own art a run for its money.
Kaorien background art looks so... real.
So to wrap it up, keep the good work on.
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@Red Lilies: I'm very happy to have her, and thank you about the book
@DragoonHP: I'm actually quite surprised by this XD Thank you for the encouragement good sir, I shall indeed try to live up to your words *salutes*
As an update for everyone, if everything goes well Wolf should be finished sometime tomorrow Which gets my hardest sprites out of the way and finished.
@DragoonHP: I'm actually quite surprised by this XD Thank you for the encouragement good sir, I shall indeed try to live up to your words *salutes*
As an update for everyone, if everything goes well Wolf should be finished sometime tomorrow Which gets my hardest sprites out of the way and finished.
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Wahh! The mother is very beautiful! Good job Starling! She really is gorgeous~
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So wolves have frustratingly colorful coats that make them a lot longer to color than should be allowed.
With that out of the way.
A mysterious wolf, will you choose him?
With that out of the way.
A mysterious wolf, will you choose him?
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To be totally honest, I thought that the Bear and Wolf would be anthropomorphic characters. But that wouldn't really be sticking to the story. It's just I'm not sure how many people will go for an animal ~_~. Conflict, conflict.
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@Sayuri: I know exactly what you mean.
When I first posted this I was highly debating spoiling the main secret it so that people would know that it isn't going to be "bestiality". I didn't get many people going: wait you're going to date ANIMALS? So I kept it the way I have it now without spoiling it. In the game itself I try very hard to make the love in the game be very: If only you were human I would love you, but you're an animal so you're only my friend.
The whole thing is pretty frustrating though.
I don't think I could every make them anthro, however, it's just such a different feeling than what I am going for. I just hope that people don't take it as EW BESTIALITY.The whole thing is pretty frustrating though.
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It could work, a la Disney's Beauty and the Beast. The Beast is definitely no bishonen, lol. Still, he's a very lovable character and, I think, he's the best romantic interest out of all the Disney movies.Starling wrote:@Sayuri: I know exactly what you mean.When I first posted this I was highly debating spoiling the main secret it so that people would know that it isn't going to be "bestiality". I didn't get many people going: wait you're going to date ANIMALS? So I kept it the way I have it now without spoiling it. In the game itself I try very hard to make the love in the game be very: If only you were human I would love you, but you're an animal so you're only my friend.I don't think I could every make them anthro, however, it's just such a different feeling than what I am going for. I just hope that people don't take it as EW BESTIALITY.
The whole thing is pretty frustrating though.
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The Wolf is... cute... OMG! The Wolf is very well drawn!!!!!!!!!!
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No.Starling wrote:A mysterious wolf, will you choose him?
Wait, yes.
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So the wonderful land of college put my poor little VN on temporary hiatus, but I've got winter break starting soon so back to working on it
The break was actually good as now I can look back on the story and as of now I'm probably going to nix the prologue because it's noticeably weaker writing (that I'm not sure I can fix) and it slows down the pace, is full of clunky exposition and many retellings of the fairytale don't include this part anyway.
I'm also planning to focus on story and coding for a while, and not worry about the art.
Sorry for the hiatus <3 But I'm back on track
The break was actually good as now I can look back on the story and as of now I'm probably going to nix the prologue because it's noticeably weaker writing (that I'm not sure I can fix) and it slows down the pace, is full of clunky exposition and many retellings of the fairytale don't include this part anyway.
I'm also planning to focus on story and coding for a while, and not worry about the art.
Sorry for the hiatus <3 But I'm back on track
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I'll be here for coding help. :3
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Thank you muchly <3 I'll definitely be bothering you when I start putting that main gameplay together.Aleema wrote:I'll be here for coding help. :3
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sometimes i wish that disney characters had anime lips too.sayuri wrote:It could work, a la Disney's Beauty and the Beast. The Beast is definitely no bishonen, lol. Still, he's a very lovable character and, I think, he's the best romantic interest out of all the Disney movies.Starling wrote:@Sayuri: I know exactly what you mean.When I first posted this I was highly debating spoiling the main secret it so that people would know that it isn't going to be "bestiality". I didn't get many people going: wait you're going to date ANIMALS? So I kept it the way I have it now without spoiling it. In the game itself I try very hard to make the love in the game be very: If only you were human I would love you, but you're an animal so you're only my friend.I don't think I could every make them anthro, however, it's just such a different feeling than what I am going for. I just hope that people don't take it as EW BESTIALITY.
The whole thing is pretty frustrating though.
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