Fantasia: Grand Finale [Hiatus]

[azureXtwilight]

Err, soon, soon.
*Mebbe after I finish this semester, but errrr XD*

[Cain0425]

i hope you do not get mad at me for asking but when is your semester over?

[Riviera]

i hope you do not get mad at me for asking but when is your semester over?

Thanks for taking one for the team and asking for the rest of us. I was wondering that too.

ANYWAY, best of luck on your studies (did I say that already? if not, shame on me), azure! I've taken classes to be a nurse, and worked as a nursing assistant, and medicine is a really interesting and rewarding career~

[azureXtwilight]

My semester ends at 27 january, let's hope I don't get make-up tests so that I get longer holidays ^_^;
And thank you Riviera! Looking forward to work with you on the future

[Cain0425]

okay thanks for tell me i sure you will do well on your tests

[AqwaGaudian]

So...Zephyr should be heterochromatic under the mask >.>;;; *has a fetish*

[HikariGlow]

I hope you do well on your tests for the semester! ^_^ Tests are no fun at all especially when you have to re-take them when you only missed a little below the mark....>>; Anyways, I really liked the demo(though I always liked your games) and the guys are really interesting. Zephyr's really amusing with his snark. Battles are a nice change for the game.
Do your best for the semester even if your brain might be mushy after the break with the chocolates, presents, and all that jazz~

[azureXtwilight]

I have to say, I have no holidays for christmas XD.

Thanks for liking it!
I don't know how long MOGF will be though, because as far as I've written, it already took me two hours to play a single path and I haven't finished half of Zeph's path

[HikariGlow]

I have to say, I have no holidays for christmas XD.

Thanks for liking it!
I don't know how long MOGF will be though, because as far as I've written, it already took me two hours to play a single path and I haven't finished half of Zeph's path

Aww That's too bad about the holidays. Well, try hard for the tests and stay awake throughout the whole time! After testing, I usually fall asleep afterwards after constant studying and baggy eyes, so I hope it doesn't happen to you.

Just hearing the fact about the 2 hours spent to play a single path that's not even half way done makes feel somewhat worried about how much I'll end up wasting my life away on this game...XD

[Cain0425]

i like long games it means there really good story in the game

[HikariGlow]

That depends how well the story develops in the game. In some games(not naming any) that are really long, the story can be good at first until the random Ass Pull sub-plot/filler come in and ruin the game, that it gets too complicated a story that no one has no idea what's happening at all, or too many questions are not answered unless there's a planned sequel. I'm not saying that this game is going to turn out bad or anything...it's really good from the demo. I'm just commenting about the long games and really good story if it's not offending.

[Marcelo_Orlando]

I have to say this is a pretty sweet series! I'm ready for the full version, just hope I have enough time off to play it.

[YukinoAi]

I hope you still continue the series I played the games a lot!!

[Lumen_Astrum]

Getting more excited in this game. C:
The theory thread in the forums is getting more heated up~
I can't wait~ C:

[Levrn]

I spoiler'd it in case there are people who hasn't played the entire demo yet.

If you're using US English

after 2nd test...
"And I hope you realise that they won't let you leave now, even if you wanted to."
umm, it isn't entirely wrong, but judging by your entire writing, you're using US English, so it should be "realize"
it's not wrong if you're using UK English though.

when you go out with Forte for the third exam..
"I'm guessing he didn't say sorry. Shea didn't seem like the kind to apologise for something like that."
apologise => apologize (if US English)

when you go out with Avalon for the third exam..
"Um, well... I feel that I misjudged you before, and I... wanted to apologise. I'm sorry. I was wrong."
again with se and ze

with Nero, at the sewer
"Before we start, could you do me a favour?"
"favour" is right in UK English, so in US English it should be "favor"

at demo's end
"You will face these, and you will harbour them... but will you let it bear fruit, and overwhelm you?"
harbour => harbor in US English

If you're using UK English

when you had arrived at PAO
"Welcome to the Pacifist Alliance Organization"
Organization should be changed to Organisation if you're using UK English... I think.

and when Ignitio said "Sir Zephyr! I-i-it's an honor!"
I think it should be "honour" if you changed it to UK English.

umm, there are people that do mind if US English and UK English is mixed, but then there's people who doesn't really care either. (I don't really mind if you mixed it, but I'm just pointing it out)

umm, do Lenarche's avatar is a must shown wherever she's talking?
because if it is, there's nine time that Lenarche's avatar didn't show
if it's on purpose then don't mind this

first when you got to know that Zephyr is your opponent and when the monologue said 'He's got a strange expression on his face...'
Lenarche asked "What's wrong?" without her avatar

second is when Ignitio was explaining about divisions. (after he said Diviners)
Lenarche said "Oh really?" followed by "Ok, I understand now." without an avatar

third is after Avalon said "Well, I have to go. I have some business to do, and... oh, Lenarche."
then Lenarche replied "Yes?" without an avatar

fourth when Lenarche failed Forte's test, and after Forte said "Wait, wait, stop saying things people will misunderstand!"
then Lenarche laughs without her avatar

fifth when Nero said "I've told you that there's no use in saying hi when no one cares."
then Lenarche said "I'm Lenarche." without her avatar

sixth is after Avalon said "So you really knocked our Quatro Leader out?"
Lenarche said "I guess so?"

seventh after Avalon said "W-what is that!? Use your magic on it, quick!"
followed by "It seems to be coming from over there..."

eighth when you go out with Alviss for the third exams and Alviss said "What do we do now? Should we go ahead? Checking their corpses won't do anything, and I get the feeling these aren't the source of the problem..."
Lenarche said "I think we should get going. It's not normal for snails to eat meat."

ninth when Nero said "Yeeep. Besides, it's obvious that Zephy-chan can protect you better than us."
then a silent Len without any avatar

about typo

at Fir's mail... (Problem?! - Fir)
"I head Leader Zephyr and Great Leader Helberg saw him!"
did you mean, "heard"?
(Kirroha-san had said it first, btw)

still with Forte, in the sewer.. (after beating the first batch of snails)
"Well... That was a good warmp-up battle, but you're missing something."
did you mean, "warm-up"?

with Nero, in the sewer.. (after beating the first batch of snails)
"Alrightm Nero!"
did you mean, "Alright,"?

at Albel mail... (Almost forgot! - Albel)
Avalon and I are going to buy some pet food for Styx... do you need to buy some for %(petname)s?
instead of the pet name the "%(petname)s" showed.

at the end of demo...
"Will they detatch you from reality, and the task at hand?"
did you mean, "detach"?

umm, I hope you didn't misunderstand me. I didn't post it to say that 'this is full of flaws' or whatnot. I just want to help, but feel free if you want to think of me as an ungrateful person XD (and sooorry for wall-of-text!)
I really enjoyed this game! I hope you continue to make VNs~
(but, ummm, is it just me or Zephyr's theme song is kinda cracked?)

(by the way, do you still accept a mission idea? or a filler idea?)