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#196 Post by Riviera »

o///o Wow! Haru-chan is so cute like that!~

*tackles him in a huge hug*

Yay for the script being almost done! :D
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#197 Post by DaR »

Oh, Haruhi.
He is just the cutest little thing~
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#198 Post by Nekosousei »

Wow, I absolutely luv this game!

the characters are so cute but i'm luving kaius. I can't wait til the game is done

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#199 Post by Julie »

I can't wait for the completion of this game! Good luck! I will definitely go for Haruhi's route too. ^^

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#200 Post by Snowflower »

teacup If you ever need proofreaders, I'm available :D
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#201 Post by teacup »

Thanks everyone !!

@SnowFlower
I think I have enough proofreaders for now but I will keep you in mind if I need any more help! ^^

Okay, I need an opinion!!
I was very unhappy with Lucan's sprite so I'm redoing it (5th time OTL). It isn't done yet but do you like this one:
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Hopefully the new is an improvement... if not.. screw him, I'll just use the old one XD

Now I'm debating if I should redo all of the characters.. sigh...!
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#202 Post by Gryphbear »

The new one looks better -- less stringy hair. There is no need to individually separate each strand of hair :)
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#203 Post by Snowflower »

thanks!

& the new Lucan does not have the same feel as the rest of the cast. They are both great looking in my opinion. Therefore, I would be find with either style as his Lucan. However, the more I look at the new Lucan, the more I'm falling in loveee XD His appearance looks a lot... smoother. The colors blend much better together.

I guess that means it would be better to redo the sprites, eh?
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#204 Post by Gryphbear »

If you want them all to sorta have the same kinda artistic style, then, yes, unless you intend to have different artistic styles to represent eac person...
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#205 Post by PrettieAngel »

I definitely like the new sprite more. I think his face is more expressive than in the older one and I think it has more personality. I also agree that his hair looks better. I think the two lines on the new one's neck look a bit odd, though. Apart from that, I think it's an improvement!
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#206 Post by SilverxBlue »

I agree with Gryphbear on the hair but I think I prefer the old Lucan's eyes rather than the new one's. I don't know why but maybe because it is darker?
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#207 Post by Julie »

I like the new one better. ^^

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#208 Post by Arithra »

I really like the new sprite! the old one looked a little wimpy!
But this one looks cool. The coloring style looks better.
The hair and the eyes really improved!
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#209 Post by Riviera »

I like the new one better, too! The hair isn't as stringy (as others have said), the clothing seems to have a bit more detail... and his expression!

He looks like he's on the verge of a really sweet, really huge smile~ It's awesome!~
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#210 Post by Deji »

I like the new one best!
...But as it is a new style, you may want to consider redrawing the rest of the cast and whatever other art you did already to keep consistency, and that can awfully time consuming D: And sometimes it's better to just spend that time finishing the game and save your newfound improvement for the next project :P
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