Turnip in Love

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#61 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

Riviera wrote:I really like it! She did a good job with the coloring. :)

What's the red thing?
Thanks, She really helped a lot.

The red thing is... well
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Keita = "Just said it already!"
YuukiCrossPudding = "Wh--wha?"
Sakuya = "Don't be rude to a lady Keita!"
Keita = "Hmph!"
Kazuto = "Hey, fighting again? Stop it!"
Ryou = "Ha! I think Riviera confused with the red thingy."
Kazuto = "Red thingy? What is that actually?"
Ryou = "I know what is that... right YuukiCrossPudding?"
All = "....."
All = "She's running away again!!!!"
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Lol
Well the red thing is for something, I might add it to the game or not.
But maybe I'm sure for 80% I'll add it in the game.
It's like a meter.
Well that's all I can say!
lol xD (sorry!)
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Keita = "I'm tired of this"
Kabuko = "What happened?"
All = "Nothing, let's just go home"
Kabuko = "What? What?"
Kabuko = "Ah!!! Don't leave me!"
Kabuko = "Bye Riviera! Sorry for all this mess! >_<"
Ryou = "Hurry up Kabu-chan!"
Kabuko = "I'm coming Ryou!"
Keita = "(Kabu-chan..?!)"
Kazuto = "!!?...."
Sakuya = "I'll call her that too later! xD"

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#62 Post by PyTom »

YuukiCrossPudding wrote:Well I've add some buttons too here and there... also some feature here and there...
If it's bad or something please tell me! I'll fix it right away~ :3
To be honest - the buttons seem kind of random to me. You have many different shapes, colors, and textures, and they don't look like they should all be on the screen at once. I'd suggest picking a couple of basic design ideas, and sticking with them, rather than trying to make each part of the screen look different.
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#63 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

PyTom wrote:
YuukiCrossPudding wrote:Well I've add some buttons too here and there... also some feature here and there...
If it's bad or something please tell me! I'll fix it right away~ :3

To be honest - the buttons seem kind of random to me. You have many different shapes, colors, and textures, and they don't look like they should all be on the screen at once. I'd suggest picking a couple of basic design ideas, and sticking with them, rather than trying to make each part of the screen look different.
Thank you! ^^
Well I'll fix it once again, so they'll blend together well
:3
Sorry for that though >_<
It looks like I'll need more practice!Alright!
*run to the photoshop and sai

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#64 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

Change the button a bit
What do you think?
If it's bad I'll change it again
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#65 Post by Julie »

Wow the sprite look so much better now! The coloring was good. ^^

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#66 Post by night_serenade »

Hey there!
Just popping in to say that I find the story really interesting and original (its not everyday one comes across a VN idea THIS original, haha). I can't wait to see how it turns out in the end, because so far it's looking like it'll be really great.

Though earlier I read that you were having some trouble writing? Like getting your ideas down and lengthening the story a bit and what not? If you need someone to help write, or to just help you get everything up and moving, then I'd be happy to help =] Just let me know, okay?
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#67 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

@julie: thanks^^
Youngster Joey really help a lot, my (bad) drawing look a lot better XP
XD
lol

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#68 Post by Youngster Joey »

Glad to be a part of the team everyone!
Yuuki, don't put yourself down like that! Your drawings looked fine on their own.

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#69 Post by ofdawnandtwilight »

i feel dumb ^^;
i've been watching tis game for weeks, yet i haven't post a reply to tell how amazing this game is gonna be!! XD
(well, maybe on DA, i think i've said so,)
but what the heck, there's no fault in wishing luck twice!~

i'm REALLY looking forward to this game~
the sprites look amazing
and that goes for the older and newer ones!
heads up for the demo!
i wish you accomplish your dream, Yuuki!
(and also finish this game in flying colours)
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

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#70 Post by night_serenade »

@nero279 ; thank you for the support of the project~!
I hope I can do Yuuki's story justice, and make this game fun to play story/plot/script wise :)
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#71 Post by Elenakiara »

The story is really coming along really well! I'm still interested and support you all the way! :3 If I'd be better in backgrounds than simply tracing from photos and adding in very minor stuff, than I'd help out! I know a very good site with free songs that has many of them, but that's all the help I can give! xD
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#72 Post by Julie »

Good luck Yuuki! If you ever need an editor or something, I'll also be willing to help. ^^

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#73 Post by ofdawnandtwilight »

Yuuki
i might be able to help you with the BGs
just go=
here http://translate.google.com/translate?h ... ao.sub.jp/
(i found this thanks to night_serenade :D )
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
(have i posted this before ^^;)

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#74 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

Thank you for all of your support everyone!
I hope this will be a great VN
and sorry for the late reply etc. I've been on holiday with my family and just got home today...
and straight to my PC :P
a bit tired and dizzy @_@
well it's a bit far too, I don't want to remember how tired it was :(

@nero279: Thanks^^
That's amazing BGs! I'll think of using that if I really can't make BGs anymore

@Julie: Thank you, I think we need any help we can have :)

@elenakiara: That'll be great! I know sites but maybe not really good for providing music etc.

@Joey: I'm the one who is glad to have you to be the colorist ^^

Hm.. just for small info, if one day or two days I didn't reply again to your pm etc.
That means I'm on my progress to finish the... MATH exam
T^T I really hate math and can't do it, so I need to study for that :3
Sorry and Thank you in advance~ :D

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#75 Post by Julie »

Feel free to pm me anytime if you need helpwith anything. ^^

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