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99 Luftballons
A short KN based on a certain favorite song of mine.
Should last less than 10 minutes.
Please tell me what you guys think about it!
Hope you guys like it!
Should last less than 10 minutes.
Please tell me what you guys think about it!
Hope you guys like it!
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Re: 99 Luftballons
Thank you!kosetsu wrote:It looks very charming~ Going to give it a try! ^u^
I hope you enjoy it!
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Re: 99 Luftballons
AUGH!
It was a great feat that you were able to make a moving story in such a short amount of play time.
I didn't know it was going to be so sadddd T_T
The menu picture is really misleading. It's not bad that it's a sad story, but I just felt really suprised.
It was touching. I do wish it had character cgs and drawn bgs instead of photos though...The menu picture is really misleading. It's not bad that it's a sad story, but I just felt really suprised.
It was a great feat that you were able to make a moving story in such a short amount of play time.
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Haha, I'm glad that you were moved by it!kosetsu wrote:AUGH!I didn't know it was going to be so sadddd T_TIt was touching. I do wish it had character cgs and drawn bgs instead of photos though...
The menu picture is really misleading. It's not bad that it's a sad story, but I just felt really suprised.
It was a great feat that you were able to make a moving story in such a short amount of play time.
I wasn't sure whether I was able to convey enough emotion or not...so thank you!
Yes, I wanted to draw more of the BGs, and maybe some character art, but I am pretty new to making V/KNs, so I'm not sure how to go about creating sprites for my games (editing and such). I also have some technical work to do on my artwork.
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Re: 99 Luftballons
I really liked the interpretation of the song.
Susan
I really liked the line about the last balloon.
I wasn't too surprised by the ending being sad. This is one of my favourite songs too.
I did find the ending a bit disjointed and over too quickly -- but that may have been the point!I wasn't too surprised by the ending being sad. This is one of my favourite songs too.
Susan
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Re: 99 Luftballons
I like that title and that you used the old money DM.
(I am a german, so i like that ;D)
the story was very short, but touching. i am a happy-ending-liking-typ so i wouldnt want to play again, or else i start crying.
(I am a german, so i like that ;D)
the story was very short, but touching. i am a happy-ending-liking-typ so i wouldnt want to play again, or else i start crying.
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Re: 99 Luftballons
Thanks you for your kind responses!
@Susan - I am glad that you liked it! The ending wasn't meant to be disjointed, but after I went back, I thought it turned out well!
@Silver - Yeah, I wanted to be authentic to the setting of the song. And, I believe the ending couldn't work any other than sad.
@Susan - I am glad that you liked it! The ending wasn't meant to be disjointed, but after I went back, I thought it turned out well!
@Silver - Yeah, I wanted to be authentic to the setting of the song. And, I believe the ending couldn't work any other than sad.
I tried to make it a little bit happy with her final line as she sends off the balloon. I wonder if that was conveyed well?
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well the ending thing you did, (i dont know how to use that spoiler write thing =))
i think i would rather keep that, than what in your story happened. but i thought its a very good end. it fits perfectly to the atmosphere.
sorry if you didnt understand my gibberish =D
i think i would rather keep that, than what in your story happened. but i thought its a very good end. it fits perfectly to the atmosphere.
sorry if you didnt understand my gibberish =D
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Ah, I see.
Thank you for your input! ^^
About DMs, I wasn't sure about what the exchange rate would be, so some of the "prices" may be a little off...I wasn't sure how much 20 DMs really is =3
Thank you for your input! ^^
About DMs, I wasn't sure about what the exchange rate would be, so some of the "prices" may be a little off...I wasn't sure how much 20 DMs really is =3
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20 Dm are 10 euro. But i don't know exactly how much dollar that are, maybe 13 or 14 dollar?
Yeah, the balloon was a bit expensive, but oh well, its not that the story was influenced by that =)
what you understood what i meant xDDok
Yeah, the balloon was a bit expensive, but oh well, its not that the story was influenced by that =)
what you understood what i meant xDDok
I meant that i rather would have kept the ballon, then send him off. but just greedy me
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It's in English or in German ?
Best regards from Italy,
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It's in English, actually.
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Thanks. I'm DL it
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