For my feed back
####### Compliments #######
-The story is sooooo appealing >//////< more plz , I'm curious to death XD
-I enjoy it very much and proud to be one in the creator team.
-Yayy for Snowflower production >w<b
though I'm a part of the creator but I also want to say that I'm looking forward to it tooo.
####### Debug zone ########
-First, CG gallery error
Traceback here
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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
IOError: Couldn't find file 'gallery_locked.png'.
While running game code:
- script at line 296 of /Users/jenniferyeon/Downloads/Shugojin!/game/CG Gallery.rpy
- python at line 516 of /Users/jenniferyeon/Downloads/Shugojin!/game/CG Gallery.rpy.
- python at line 268 of /Users/jenniferyeon/Downloads/Shugojin!/game/CG Gallery.rpy.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 270, in bootstrap
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\main.py", line 310, in main
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\main.py", line 93, in run
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\execution.py", line 259, in run
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\ast.py", line 574, in execute
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\python.py", line 957, in py_exec_bytecode
File "/Users/jenniferyeon/Downloads/Shugojin!/game/CG Gallery.rpy", line 516, in <module>
File "/Users/jenniferyeon/Downloads/Shugojin!/game/CG Gallery.rpy", line 268, in show
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\ui.py", line 216, in interact
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\display\core.py", line 1608, in interact
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\display\core.py", line 1802, in interact_core
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\display\core.py", line 262, in predict
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\display\core.py", line 236, in visit_all
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\display\core.py", line 262, in <lambda>
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\display\im.py", line 459, in predict_one
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\display\im.py", line 197, in get
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\display\im.py", line 488, in load
File "E:\RENPY\Shugojin-win32\renpy\loader.py", line 319, in load
IOError: Couldn't find file 'gallery_locked.png'.
While running game code:
- script at line 296 of /Users/jenniferyeon/Downloads/Shugojin!/game/CG Gallery.rpy
- python at line 516 of /Users/jenniferyeon/Downloads/Shugojin!/game/CG Gallery.rpy.
- python at line 268 of /Users/jenniferyeon/Downloads/Shugojin!/game/CG Gallery.rpy.
Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 6.11.2b
-And I found that the UI buttons (skip,save,load,pref) was disappear after past the CG at stairway ,huh?, you might forgot to show it again or something
####### Suggestions #######
-Free limitation
Using free stuff has its own limit
you can't have thing like what in your mind (BGs in game should be more oriental style , I feel that the BGs in the estate seem to be more western taste) , and also , images size seem too small
So , I thinking about fixing them up. I'll try to draw homemade BGs for youuuu XD but I'm not quite sure that it will turn out good.And as I say formerly I'll try some GUI pic toooo.
more free BGM
This part I can't do anythings much ,only search for the sites
Not sure if you already known or not
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-Aiko's
I'm a bit confuse about the costume a little bit.
She come with the school uniform ,but why Ren didn't seem to notice the difference? or you may explain it in later story?
Or maybe because the oriental style costume sprites still on my progress orz.
Hmmm, I think this 's all for now.
If I realize something missing I'll tell you again ^^