Andraliba's works~(Please critique!)

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Andraliba's works~(Please critique!)

#1 Post by andraliba »

So I thought, untill I have an idea for my first visual novel(No worries, I begin dreaming small XD), I should improve my drawings.
So, I'll hope you'll give some critique to my drawings that I'll post here :mrgreen:

Here are some of my drawings(from newest to oldest):
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tree_revamp_by_andraliba-d38xlv9.png
kamisama_hajimemashita_nanami_by_andraliba-d38uq1o.png
seychelles_lineart_by_andraliba-d36y67x.png
christmas_kiss_by_andraliba-d367haz.jpg
x_mas_req__thanosxlen_by_andraliba-d35qd50.jpg
x_mas_req__skye_by_andraliba-d35qccy.jpg
x_mas_req__stephan_by_andraliba-d360sgc.jpg
x_mas_req__adrianne_by_andraliba-d35ldw4.jpg
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#2 Post by otomegirl24 »

Wow, these are really good! *insert thumbs up*
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#3 Post by andraliba »

I'm really happy that you like them :)
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#4 Post by andraliba »

My failed attempt at anatomy:
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#5 Post by andraliba »

This one came out somewhat okay, I think :P
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It's the cover for my comic~
It's the cover for my comic~
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#6 Post by Miss-Mae »

They're looking good to me. :D I love the couple pictures, they're so cute! <3
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#7 Post by andraliba »

Miss-Mae> I'm glad that you like them :D
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Uh, the hands came out bad...
Uh, the hands came out bad...
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#8 Post by blakjak »

That is a sweet drawing.
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#9 Post by Miss-Mae »

Aw, that picture is so sweet! I love how joyful the girl looks <3
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#10 Post by Alera »

Looking pretty nice- I see future for you! XD
What I would suggest is use some more shades for your shadows. It will add more depth and realistic look- your art will look more 'convincing'. But everything comes with practice! You make mistakes- you fix them~
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#11 Post by andraliba »

blakjak>Glad to hear that you think so :)

Miss-Mae>Well, I love to draw characters joyfully :D

Alera>Thanks a lot for the suggestion! I'll do that in the next drawing :mrgreen:
Aye,aye, I'll keep drawing!Image
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I tried a little different coloring style here :)
I tried a little different coloring style here :)
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#12 Post by andraliba »

I tried to use more shades in this pic, like Alera suggested, but it isn't really visible on the chibis orz
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#13 Post by Lumen_Astrum »

Hikari looked like Lenarche at first LOL XD
I can't critique right now, but all I have to say is that you are a nice artist~ :D
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