(otome) Celest in Wonderland (WIP)

[night_serenade]

Alright, here's a pretty easy to use site: http://html-color-codes.info/
Just click on the colour you want, and the code for it will appear
Do you know how to add them into the coding?

[SyphyChan]

Alright, here's a pretty easy to use site: http://html-color-codes.info/
Just click on the colour you want, and the code for it will appear
Do you know how to add them into the coding?

Yes I do. Thanks so much again

[SyphyChan]

Alright, here's a pretty easy to use site: http://html-color-codes.info/
Just click on the colour you want, and the code for it will appear
Do you know how to add them into the coding?

Im sooooory I just have ONE more question. With that whole if pick == thingy is their any way to have it where for one thing to happen you need to click 2 specific choices thruout the story. (urgh hard to explain.)

[night_serenade]

I'm pretty sure you can do that, just put both of the if statements in it. So instead of only putting one, put both:

if pick == "such and such"
if pick == "such and such2"

I'm not sure if that's how you do it, try it out and see if it works. If not, let me know, and I'll go look for the real way to do it

[SyphyChan]

I'm pretty sure you can do that, just put both of the if statements in it. So instead of only putting one, put both:

if pick == "such and such"
if pick == "such and such2"

I'm not sure if that's how you do it, try it out and see if it works. If not, let me know, and I'll go look for the real way to do it

Im pretty sure i've tried that but i'll try again. Ive also noticed that it only works for the most previous action. Ive tried to do the if pick thing from 2 action before and it didnt work. Is their a reason why?

[night_serenade]

Hm, I think there's this way (the 2nd post, 2nd set if coding): http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... f=8&t=8621
Where you only get an option if the player has picked a certain previous menu choice.
But that isn't what you're looking for exactly, right?

I think you may be better off posting a question in Renpy help, because I'm not the best programmer, and there are many others who are a lot better and, I'm sure, would be glad to help.

Sorry I couldn't help you out with this one!

[YuukiCrossPudding]

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label school:
    
    scene house
    
    m "Must hurry, that teacher will be really happy to punish me if I late, and it's snowy too!"
    
    if eat == "nothing":
        m "Ugh..my stomach hurt, my head dizzy... maybe because I haven't eat anything.."
        
        m "I think my vision geting blurry"
        
        scene black
        with fade
        stop music
  
        m "Hmm.. it's so warm.."
        m "Wait, I smell something sweet.."      
        scene kaito eat
        with dissolve
        play music "meet.mp3"
        
        m "What..?"
        
        b "Ah..you wake up! I thought you dead for a moment"
        
        m "Who..who are you?"
        
        k "Well I'm Kaito! Don't worry I'm a good guy"
        
        k "Why are you sleeping in the street like that? it's not good for your health and it's so cold!"
        
        m "Well I'm not sleeping! I'm just fainted.."
        
        k "Huh? why? are you sick?"
        
        m "No, its just I haven't eat anything today"
        
        k "Well that's not good...want Ice cream?"
        
        m "Eh?! But it's cold here!"
        
        k "Well rather than starving..."
        
        m "Okay then I'll eat it"
            
        scene park
        with dissolve
        show kaito
            
        m "Thanks for the ice cream"
                
        m "(I sleep in his lap for how long? Uh..I hope my face doesn't get red)"
                
        k "No problem I already eat 20 cups anyway"
                
        m "Huh?! are you kidding?!"
                
        k "Eh? no I'm not why? Too little huh? Before that I already eat the cone one though, maybe about 15..."
                
        m "You really love ice cream huh...wait!"
                
        k "What happen?"
                
        m "What time is it?"
                
        k "Well almost 9 o'clock, why?"
                
        m "Oh no! I'm late for school! Thanks again! Bye!"
            
        scene black
        with dissolve
            
        "I rushed to the school"
        jump school1
            
    if eat == "full":
        m "Such a lovely day but it's cold, I'm a bit sleepy after eat though.."
        
        m "Well better hurry to school"
        
        scene black
        with dissolve
        
        "Because I eat many food I'm late for school"
        
        jump school1

but before that you need to put this! remember this code first, then the if with double equal!
don't forget to put this [ : ] too....

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menu:
       "Bread, milk, fried egg":
           $ love_kaito-=10
           $ eat = "full"
           m "Hmm.. I'm full, now let's go to school"
           jump school

       "No need for break fast!":
           $ love_kaito+=10
           $ eat = "nothing"
           m "I'll be late if I eat, now I must go to the school!"
           jump school

That mean you must put this $ eat = "nothing"
or simply the character to define the variable or something?
then when you have the variable or the words,
like for $ eat = "nothing"
you could change the 'eat' and 'nothing'
to anything you wants that to make that.

like

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menu:
"I hate you!":
$ pick = "hate"
"I love you...":
$ pick = "love"

then this for the "if" thing

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if pick == "hate":
m "why? I like your sister not you! so I don't care..."
if pick == "love":
m "really? but I just love your sister..."

Well I hope this helps?
or the same goes for alice(night_serenade) post up there, but it's with number, so we can make it more or less within the game... or i thought so...

basically to sum it up the $ eat = "nothing"
is like an item word to unlock
the option to a scene or something using this if eat == "nothing"
(so if you got eat and it's nothing you'll get the if with eat nothing scene)
depends on you....


um.,..I hope that's explain it? xDD
I'm bad at explaining something.

[YuukiCrossPudding]

Oh yeah!
if you want to a specific event to occur if we have chose 2 true answer just use this thing
like $ love_kaito-=10
example!

$ love_kaito=0 <---------------------------- that mean love_kaito have 0 point

"Love or loved?"
menu:
"love":
$ love_kaito+=5
"loved":
$ love_kaito+=10

"Hate or hated?"
menu:
"Hate":
$ love_kaito+=5
"Hated":
$ love_kaito+=10

That'll make $ love_kaito =20
if the player choose the second answer for all question right?
and make $ love_kaito =5
if the player choose the first answer.

then just make the if with the double equal.

if love_kaito ==20:
k "I love you"
if love_kaito ==10:
k "I care for you"
if love_kaito ==15:
k "I just have feelings for you"

and it'll be like this in the end

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label start:
    $ love_kaito=0

    "Love or loved?"

    menu:
        "love":
            $ love_kaito+=5

        "loved":
            $ love_kaito+=10
            
    "Hate or hated?"
    menu:
        "Hate":
            $ love_kaito+=5
        "Hated":
                $ love_kaito+=10
            
label stor:
    if love_kaito ==20:
        "I love you"
    if love_kaito ==10:
        "I care for you" 
    if love_kaito ==15:
        "Well, I just have feelings for you"

[Elenakiara]

First of all, I can't wait to see how this story turns out! It's a really interesting subject, so good luck with it and have fun making it! :3

Also, I'd like to suggest a second place where you can get colors too (http://www.ficml.org/jemimap/style/color/wheel.html). I just prefer the color wheel, myself, so I might as well put this here just in case. xDD

I'd also like to thank YuukiCrossPudding since all the advice is helping me too! xDD <3

[SyphyChan]

Thanks everyone so much. You all are such good help and i'm really starting to get the hang of this thing. Also thanks for the support! I'm going to work extra hard for everyone.

[SyphyChan]

So I said I'd post the pics of the characters. Sorry it's been taking so long. Me and my artist are both working on a drawing for an art competition this saturday so we are really rushing to finish. After saturday the drawings will get done more quickly. Sorry for the wait.

[Boniae]

Even though it takes after alice and wonderland, I kind of like the story premise. I think this has a good chance of being a good visual novel, I'd love to play a demo/complete version in the future.

[SyphyChan]

Even though it takes after alice and wonderland, I kind of like the story premise. I think this has a good chance of being a good visual novel, I'd love to play a demo/complete version in the future.

Hehe thanks. As soon as I get some of the visuals done I'll be able to put up a demo. I have enough script done to do so.

[night_serenade]

Great to hear that the demo will be ready soon!!
Just wanted to let you know that if you need someone to edit it before you post it here, I'm more than willing to do it

[SyphyChan]

Great to hear that the demo will be ready soon!!
Just wanted to let you know that if you need someone to edit it before you post it here, I'm more than willing to do it

Thanks ^-^ and did you see the art I posted?