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#106 Post by Julie »

They all look a little chubbier in this version and Kazuto's head is too small for his body. ^^ You've been redoing your sprites too often and I personally think the old ones look better...but that's just my opinion. xD

Oh and I'm happy to be your script editor. ^^
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#107 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

@julie: waaa!! >A<
sorry :( it's just my hand itchy to change the sprites, well I know something is weird but I just don't know where xD
I think I should really thought about practicing some more... :3
Haha, thank you for the advice! I'll try to fix them all up!
and try not to make the same mistakes to other sprites >_<

it's my pleasure! love the story so far <33

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#108 Post by Julie »

Try to make their bodies slimmer. That should work. ^^ Maybe it will look better when it's colored so don't worry! :D

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#109 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

@julie: probably, could you see my skill development topic?
is that proportion for body is okay? :3

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#110 Post by Julie »

Okay I'll check it out. ^^

I saw it! It actually looks better! Oh and I made a mistake. I meant to say that KAZUTO'S head is too small for his body. Keita actually looks okay. Sorry for the confusion. xD

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#111 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

@julie: Thanks :)
I'll fix them all now xD

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#112 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

Okay, after for a long time not showing up xD
and it looks like the progress have been so slow, actually I'm busy at school, and it ruined my mood to actually post anything, but I believe my friends who help me will still work on this :)

T^T sorry ;_;
but while gone I'm practicing how to color, draw and etc.
.....I don't know if I made any progress though >A<
and it's already near my holiday! I think I'll have one or two weeks holiday, so I can focus on doing the sprites and interface again :)
....even I still have an exam tomorrow xD
and piles of homework for holiday (I can ask my friends for that :D)

here's the sprite, and it's still not finished
because I'm waiting for my colorist :D (I color it myself just to see how the sprite looks like)
...I don't think I made any progress in my drawing T^T
ah, I also change the hair color a bit, and the uniform color(just the tie xD)
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#113 Post by Snowflower »

Looks good to me. :)
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#114 Post by Elenakiara »

By the way!! xDD I'm still alive, but I was really buried under piles of homework. xD My last exam's on
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#115 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

@snowflower: thanks :D
T^T I'm glad it looked good for you xD

@elenakiara: Whee~ good luck!
ToT same here, there's so many homework! math, chemistry, geography etc.
well I can handle it for a while :)
and I can concentrate too for this..maybe for 1 or 2 weeks?
my holiday is until 2nd May (After that, exams again! nooooo!!! T^T when this suffering ends...)

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#116 Post by Abeiramar »

I read the first post. Aww, the story is so cute! A turnip turning into a human sounds bizarre but very original too~
I'm curious to see how someone can behave like a plant since she's still a turnip in her mind :lol: !
What if Kazuto tries to eat turnips? How will Kabuko react :x ?

Hope to see your project finished soon. *I want to play it~ . But it's better if you study for your exams first haha :P .

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#117 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

@abeiramar: thank you! I'm glad actually this story not weird, since I make this story when I'm still in elementary school xD
I just love plants (too much playing harvest moon xD)
xD that's what will we try to show in this game :3

Thanks^^ I hope so? There's still many to do though ;_;
yeah, I better do that? not the exam worries me, but the homework!!! xD

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#118 Post by Celestine »

Interesting story plot. Your characters are well diverse. I like your sprite Keita. But why is he wearing headphones? I like it though.
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#119 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

@celestine Thanks xD he's wearing headphone because..he like to be alone, and don't want to hear people voice(he think they're so noisy and annoying so he wear one)

OTL I'm changing my art style so much, and redoing the sprite... again and again and again!
I even dreaming about it.. hiks
when the sprite finished(even the expressions already finished)
I was like... omg this is ugly
and I can't help it, I want to redo it

I really hope this one is actually better! So I can stop redoing it

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I want to die now orz -dies-
;A; please comment and critic...
Thanks! xD

*found composer
*for those who is helping me in this project, *A* please pm me!
(I try to pm some ppl but no reply orz) ^^ but no rush /o/

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#120 Post by azureXtwilight »

He looks... Bishier! XD
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