Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#2851 Post by LVUER »

@YonYonYon:
Yes, so colorful and bright. But at least it matched with the sprite's colors. If you think it's too vivid, then you could use photoshop to change the "overall" color. This is why I soooo love digital art ^_^
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#2852 Post by PyTom »

Yeah, I think YonYonYon's background works well with the sprite. I wouldn't change it.
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#2853 Post by YonYonYon »

Thanks everyone ^^

Now, MC's head testing

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perfect!!! oAo now I can begin to add my script into Ren'Py
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#2854 Post by Snowflower »

I agree with everyone regarding YonYonYon's work.
They work really well
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#2855 Post by charmwitch »

I definitely like how the colors match too. :>
Lately I've been switching between lineless and not so lineless art. I'm not sure what I like yet, but experimenting is fun :

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#2856 Post by YonYonYon »

@charmwitch

Oh, they're so cool and cute oAo I really love these pointy noses
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#2857 Post by charmwitch »

Yonyonyon> I fluctuate between the two and I think it gives them more personality. I don't know what I like best yet though. They're really fun to draw, that's for sure.

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#2858 Post by Alera »

I agree- the arts are really sweet!

And different people have different noses, right? ^^ It's cool to show more personality.
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#2859 Post by qq »

Everyone's art is so pretty! I plan to color this so any feedback is greatly appreciated especially on anatomy and pose. Have no fashion sense so the dress are very simple.
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#2860 Post by Abeiramar »

@qq : It's great that you're training complex poses like that one. I like the expression of the girl on the right.
Is the other one wearing sunglasses ;) ? Her skirt is too long on the right.

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#2861 Post by qq »

@ Abeiramar thanks for the feedback. The girl on the left is just wearing glasses it got a bit dark after I drew the eyes behind the frames. About her dress it's suppose to be a diagonally cut dress, I probably didn't draw that well enough.
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#2862 Post by YonYonYon »

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#2863 Post by Pyonkotchi »

@qq. You did a good job, the anatomy looks fine to me
but I think the characters look too stiff, especially the left girl. Her hair is flowing but her body is stiff. They're dancing so they should be reallly flowing and i guess, "free". When you see dancers you notice they have dramatic movement,
take a look at lots of references since this isn;t something I could probably describe xD;
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#2864 Post by SmileyFace »

CHIBIS ARE TAKING OVER! >:D
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#2865 Post by YonYonYon »

SmileyFace:
Yay for pokemons :D
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