EternalDream's Art -- Critique Please~

[Pyonkotchi]

w-wow! I see so much improvement from the first post witchcraft
the coloring is really nice. <33

[EternalDream]

@ lepapillonrouge: LOL Yeaaah~ Zerluke <3 XD
@ Lumen: Nooo >:O I suck at soft shading ;_; I'm pretty sure you're way better than me in that OvOb
@ Everyone else: Thanks~ >w<

I also feel that I've improved a lot since now I can't even look at my past posts with a straight face anymore ;A; lol

[EternalDream]

Double post: I'm bumping this~ 8D

Anyways, my latest picture, I mixed all sorts of random shading together and this was what it looked like in the end ;D



Omg... Sorry it's so big and takes up so much space ;A; I forgot to resize it before and now I'm too lazy to reupload it. So deal with the giant ass picture. XD This is... my first time drawing a non chibi guy... without a top. Well, even though he's wearing a coat of some sort. <.<;; I cover whatever I can't draw orz (Reason why bandages are there lol) I'm pretty sure I got many... MANY anatomy parts wrong so I strongly recommend anyone who can critique me to do it! D:<

Edit: Oh shoot, I forgot to change the colors of the lines for the shoe. ^^;;

[Lumen_Astrum]

Cool~ Your shading is cool xD

[EternalDream]

Thanks XD

His face close up:



I dunno how to soft shade hair well so I just cell shade XD

[EternalDream]

Double posting FTW (yay) ... No.

Didn't upload this for a long time so. And also, I got my first tablet so everything will *probably* look better than before. My almost latest picture:



Critics are definitely welcome. She's supposed to be short so ignore how midget like she is =w= Also, I can't seem to color hair well anymore... T_T