Stormy night..just for fun

[clua]

Hello! Long time I dont post here
I keep doing visuals but most of them are failures..
;_; But I did this one(Which is for a small contest)
Its something very short and somehow comedic...My english isnt the best so if you can give me some feedback I would apreciate it a lot!

btw do you know how to activate the images on the cg gallery and make a credits screen at the end?
well here is the link!
sorry only for windows..orz
http://www.mediafire.com/?l32zfpccr4radc3

[fioricca]

HAHAHAJDSGFSDH I LAUGHED SO MUCH

the entire concept is so ridiculous it was hilarious HAHAHA

The grammar and spelling definitely needs work - such as 'disease', 'patient', but on the whole the crazy concept was hilarious. Thanks for the fun!

[teacup]

That was weird XD
I don't understand it. But I liked it? The art is cool and Mr. Gondola is really adorable.

I loved the CG of them in Heaven!

There was a lot of grammar mistakes though... if you want, I can point out the ones I saw to you.

[Snow Blossom]

O_O Wawawa? That was so random I don't even -
I guess I like it though. Overall I'd say it was quite cute!

[clua]

HAHAHAJDSGFSDH I LAUGHED SO MUCH

the entire concept is so ridiculous it was hilarious HAHAHA

The grammar and spelling definitely needs work - such as 'disease', 'patient', but on the whole the crazy concept was hilarious. Thanks for the fun!

XD sorry if it was kind of random
but in some way it isnt
Its inspired in the ps(pet society...yeah that game on facebook)universe
the characters Im using are actually my pet, and other pets from the forum of the game

the contest was about making an ilustration of the purple girl(stormy)
but I wanted to do a visual lol

Btw a friend helped me with the text in english..i will upload soon the gramatically correct version(I used another font too because the other one lacked of "`")

so glad that it make you laugh...I was unsure if it was funny lol

That was weird XD
I don't understand it. But I liked it? The art is cool and Mr. Gondola is really adorable.

I loved the CG of them in Heaven!

There was a lot of grammar mistakes though... if you want, I can point out the ones I saw to you.

XD! Yes please If you can!..It would be a great help to me
Im planning to add more CG to this mini visual

right now Im working on the sprites
*Re doing Kanibal*

O_O Wawawa? That was so random I don't even -
I guess I like it though. Overall I'd say it was quite cute!

Sorry! as I said up there..Is meant to be understand by the persons who play that game
And I tryed to make some references of some movies because the host of the contest is a movie lover

But beyond that, You can tell me what I can do to make my VN better !

I will be updating the first post next week with a new version
Hope Its more understandable that this one!

and I dont know still how to activate images on the CG gallery ...;__;
*checks cookbook more*

[Aseret]

I know it's been a while, but your mediafire link doesn't work
it's an invalid/deleted file D:
the thing is, i tried your game, the knife of the traitor and absolutely loved it,
so i wanted to play your other games too