Love Sniper(ENGLISH VERSION RELEASED!)

[bakufu]

This is the first Ren'py game I made.

Story
A comedy visual novel about a boy who tried to win his crush's heart.

Screenshots



Playtime: 10 min
Possible Endings: 13
Ages: All
Language: Japanese

Download
ALL Platforms: http://www.mediafire.com/?0b7c6wmqq6b9nmb

[Chu-3]

Congrats for your first post on lemma bakufu~~!
*This is bakufu from suisen that helped me a lot in testing the Japanese version of my game. Her games are sweet too ^^.

I haven't got all endings within the game. As far I still can't get other than bad ending lol.
But they're funny ^^.

[SilverxBlue]

From the look of the guy at the second screenshot, it does look funny.
Can't play it though. T_T
*curses inability to learn Japanese quickly*

[CombatEye]

From the look of the guy at the second screenshot, it does look funny.
Can't play it though. T_T
*curses inability to learn Japanese quickly*

Unfortunately I have the same problem of not knowing enough Japanese to even attempt understanding a VN. The art style looks good though. Any plans for translating it into other languages?

[Chu-3]

Hear it bakufu? LOL

Actually I'm talking with her now about translating her games. But we need a more specific plan for it. And I'll need a proofreader too, that can work fast. (since my english is really rough).

Hope that this works well so I'll be able to make collaboration with more circles, and provide the games to you. Of course on the contrary, I'm also thinking to translate English VN to Japanese. Please note that we're still discussing about it.

And for you who can understand Japanese, just feel free to try it!

[Mink]

Yeah, if English isn't your first language, having a native speaker read it over for you would be a really good idea. ;)

On topic, I can't read that, but the art is cute and may play it regardless, just for that.

[Chu-3]

Okay then, I just mailed bakufu and we might translate the game soon~~. Thanks for all people that has already offered the proofread ^^; I never thought I would get so many proofread offers after posted about the translation plan.

[Greeny]

My Japanese reading isn't up to level but I'm giving the game a go anyways.

Maybe it would be worthwhile to make a version without Kanji?

[ludeshka]

The art looks lovely and fun!
(...I'm another one of the people who will have to wait for the english translation, though...^^)

[Chu-3]

I just finished the translatiONNNNN deshi!!! *hand it to sakebento for proofreading
I hope you can understand it well though, my english is pretty bad. ><

Wakarimashi, wakarimashi ♪

[Blue Lemma]

OOOooooh translation! Looking forward to it
Wishful thinking here, but it might be cool to have the other language in those Ren'Py clicky notes or whatever in the game so that it can be like a bilingual VN to help people with Japanese/English

[Chu-3]

@.@ I don't know if there's a way to do that.
I might advise her so but, can anyone tell me how to do it first?

[OtomeWeekend]

lol at the title screen xD Awesome it was funny. But can't deny the fact that it has

an ecchi side Dx I mean, the girls' skirts were way too short I actually need to wonder why I can't see their panties or does this imply they don't wear any!? *sounds perverted, but I'm a girl so no, I'm not imagining the ecchi stuff*

[redcat]

This game looks interesting.
I'm looking forward to the translated version.
I wonder if Japanese school really allow super short skirt...

[Chu-3]

don't know they allow it or not but, I did see a lot of students there wear it lmao.
@otomeweekend

have you get noriko or ageha end? at least at ageha end you'll see the girl in swimsuit. and for bl lover.... just get aoba end.... DESHI!