So that took a LOT longer than I thought it would (not counting the time I spent playing LRR)
BUT
Donovan's sprite is finally complete~
And that's like his constant expression, he is seriously not a happy goblin XD Not that the goblin race in my games are ever really that happy...
And all I have left to input for editing is Snow White's Non-Plot Events, so the stuff with the boys.
@Celestine: What Aleema said

He's a Goblin, a kind a readaptation of the fact that the character is a angry old dwarf in the original fairytale.
@GeneDNC: All it is is words right now, so it shouldn't be too different to proofread~ You'll need to get a dropbox account, however, since I've found that the only real way you can edit/proofread something for a game is inside Ren'Py itself (That way you get a feel for the timing), and dropbox makes that very easy.

Thank you and if you can get a dropbox, I'll contact you when I finish up.
I am also a huge fan of adapted fairytale, which is why I've always wanted to make one (and this would now be my second)
EDIT: ALSO!!!
I've been looking over my endings again and the sheer amount of them and I realized something that maybe I should make clear. There are really only 5 endings for each girl (so about 10 endings) HOWEVER, there are more factors to the ending than just who you end up with and so the endings work like Princess Maker in which there are many variations of the
'same ending" due to the choices you made during the game(The ending might be Artist, but did she marry a noble? Or a merchant?).
The game pushes you along the main plot line but ALL of the relationship (except your Mom) are 100% under your control.