Doppelganger (GXB,mystery,horror)+demo [on hold]

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Re: Doppelganger (GXB,mystery,horror)+demo+update13/7

#481 Post by kersplode » Wed Aug 24, 2011 7:32 pm

got the demo! I like blake & raphael so far, they're both chill dudes. :D

as for errors, I hope this list isn't too long, I'm just a tad nitpicky... I didn't give rico the letter, and later yuri said "We're even now, isn't it?" should be something like "We're even now, right?" I guess~ and later anasatsia says "there re no buts!" soon after that, "spine" should be "spines". it doesn't display lee's name when he talks about how he feels bad for letting you walk to the cafe alone. the blue-hair guy says "she knows one or two about that". maybe should be "one or two things about that"? the doorbell rang after I opened the door to talk to the policeman. he says "who do you think will do this to her?", should be would instead of will, then "like weird people or weird entity...", should be entities. showed lee's photo when jun called me after a call to yuri failed. later lucia said to her mum, "...help on something, maybe lesson." should be "maybe a lesson"? after that, "I quickly grab a bread" should be "I quickly grab some bread"/"I quickly grab a slice of bread". but I guess it could be a breakfast bread? idk~ later, "while sitting on a park" should be "in the park". later still, "why did the police left your pencil box?" left should be leave. in the lines shuang has after that, she should say "be considered a clue or not", "conducted a fingerprint test on it", and then "I really think it's the last time he'll ever go there. next, "as if saying I should've go home with him" should be "gone home with him". then lee says "In case anything happens." that's a sentence fragment.
I'll stop there, I feel pretty rude >w> great game though! I have no idea if I'm even on anyone's route yet, and I'm already wrapped up in the story~
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Re: Doppelganger (GXB,mystery,horror)+demo+update13/7

#482 Post by LadyAvori » Wed Aug 24, 2011 8:02 pm

Yay that update makes me all warm inside! Ah this is going to be hours of my life well spent :)

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#483 Post by azureXtwilight » Thu Aug 25, 2011 3:39 am

Thank you everyone!

Hmm, I've handed the demo to my editor so I hope there won't be mistakes like that anymore when you play the full game!

I'm done with Blake, finally. Now I'm writing this person's path who is staring at you with yandere eyes. :P
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#484 Post by TwoBreaths » Thu Aug 25, 2011 5:45 am

azureXtwilight wrote:Now I'm writing this person's path who is staring at you with yandere eyes. :P
Raphael is next? And a yandere?
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#485 Post by Serendipity » Thu Aug 25, 2011 8:28 am

YANDERE? 8) Yessss~

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#486 Post by Coren » Thu Aug 25, 2011 9:16 am

Not so fast, people. ^^ Doppelganger IS a dark story after all, and most of the characters have some... problems, or others. Not necessarily yandere of course, but problems nonetheless.

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#487 Post by Serendipity » Thu Aug 25, 2011 3:39 pm

Erk...sorry the word yandere does strange things to me. But man Raphael has got the yandere look down in that pic ._.U

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#488 Post by ComposerKuandohan » Sun Aug 28, 2011 3:26 am

Hello everyone!

I just joined this site, and I'm here to say that my brother and I are composers!
If you guys need any music for your projects just contact me!

Right now my brother and I are composing for this project Doppelganger.

Here's a forum post with information on us.

https://www.mochimedia.com/community/fo ... r-projects

Here's my e-mail: julianwyattsmith172@yahoo.com (Also my MSN)

Nice to meet you all!

Happy composing! ~ Wynn

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#489 Post by azureXtwilight » Sun Aug 28, 2011 3:42 am

And I hope you'll support them! Ciao! ;)
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#490 Post by azureXtwilight » Tue Aug 30, 2011 10:23 am

Uhm, I need to make a warning though.

As far as writing goes, this game has a "love-love meter" equivalent to frozen essence. Hmm, there's some bit of dates and love confessions... But it's more story-oriented. My point is to show how people change, and how people's wishes can cause destruction. It's meant to be a twisted story after all, and some people aren't meant to be loved. 8O

Oh, and the main mystery is not finding anastasia's attacker. It's a bit obvious actually 8D

Oh, and you can go into Shuang's path now. (Maybe an implied GXG)

Hoorrray!
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Re: Doppelganger (GXB,mystery,horror)+demo+update13/7

#491 Post by Riviera » Mon Sep 05, 2011 9:40 pm

I will be conceited and believe that I had something to do with this.

Mweeheehee~

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#492 Post by Coren » Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:01 am

Something to do with what? XD

The bit about Shuang's path having implied GxG is the only thing I wasn't involved in.

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#493 Post by Shioriemei » Fri Sep 09, 2011 10:33 am

0.0 interesting

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#494 Post by Riviera » Fri Sep 09, 2011 11:36 am

Kirroha wrote:Something to do with what? XD

The bit about Shuang's path having implied GxG is the only thing I wasn't involved in.
Haha, yeah, that. I don't actually think that I had anything to do with that.. but.. a fangirl can dream! :)
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Re: Doppelganger (GXB,mystery,horror)+demo+update13/7

#495 Post by Coren » Fri Sep 09, 2011 12:32 pm

Well, I had nothing to do with that, for sure. XDD I'm not into GxG, but I did decide on a path with Shuang, just not romantically inclined.

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