Hello Teacup (:
I LOVE your game! x 100000... I got so hooked I couldn't stop playing
even though I was supposed to be studying
in fact, your game inspired me to make a VN of my own
but it's definitely nowhere near your standard in all aspects (:
I'm so glad you're going to make (P)lanets 2 ! Will be looking forward to it!
Just some comments:
Lucan: I liked his character the most at first..The sweet, polite, considerate, gentlemanly type..
My favourite part was when he was sewing up Marin's skirt. I thought : "That is so sweet! Can someone sew my skirts too? " Hahaha! Just kidding...
I love Lucan's end the most because it was so cute! Their dialogue was so adorable! I could imagine three to five year old girls say "Niisan, You're married?" or "They kiss all night long and that's how they make babies...But first you have to get married" I totally laughed out loud at that !
Actually I think Lucan's ending was the best! But maybe I'm biased cos I like little girls a lot.
My only complaint about Lucan? " Why didn't you come and save me from those bad people in the alley? Why did you leave me alone?" hahaha but its not really a complaint (: just what I was thinking when I was playing the game. Where was my knight in shining armour? But actually it made me like Kaius path a lot more, because both Ryuu and Lucan didn't save Marin, so Kaius appeared to be even more heroic.
Ryuu: I played Ryuu's path next. I really liked what Ryuu said about the mountains, that when you see them from afar, they look beautiful. But when you look at the mountains from up close, they may not be as beautiful as when you had viewed them from afar. I thought that was so true! Sometimes allowing yourself to become closer to others means that you'd be vulnerable, because they can see your flaws. But if they can look past those flaws and still love you, then you'd know that those people are true friends.
I liked the part where Ryuu was angry with Kaius for making Marin cry and how he wanted to cheer her up.
( He kind of... overshadowed Lucan in this aspect when I was playing Lucan's path, Lucan's not at protective as Ryuu, but Ryuu's not as considerate as Lucan, but everyone has their good and not so good points in their personalities(: )
Kaius: I didn't want to play Kaius's path at all at first. I'm really bad at "dealing" with guys who are not directly nice. But he turned out to have the best story / best path of all! I guess it all started with the kittens. Those scenes were so cute! I liked the part where he carried Marin and refused to let her down, even when she struggled with him.
When he brought Marin to the pet store to buy a kitten, I thought that was a brilliant idea. Since he wasn't so good with relationships yet, he could spend more time with Marin by taking care of the kitten together. His path was also the funniest ! I laughed out loud at the "his thing" part. Hahaha!
Overall: I liked the psychic theme! Psychic powers always make everything a lot more interesting. Marin's parents were really heartless though, I would have been seriously hurt if my parents thought those things about me. Maybe it's a good thing we can't read another person's mind, people's thoughts can be really scary.
Haruhi is a really cute character! The part where He was going to lift up his shirt for Ryuu and Lucan was hilarious!
The theme, story, music, characters, art, endings, everything was great! No complaints!(: Thanks for a wonderful VN!