- Rewritten Ennui
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If you aren't confident in your artistic skills, enlist the help of an artist or use the free resources!MusicaFate wrote:Things I must point out -
>>> I suck at drawing
>>> I'm tabletless...
Other than that, your story looks pretty generic. That doesn't mean it's bad, but try to make it as heartwarming/touching as possible. Games like these need pathos and emotion! *fist shake* Also, make sure that your characters actually have a personalities. I might play this depending on how it turns out.
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- Completed: Case of the missing bracelet, Case of the mysterious stalker
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This is quite compelling, if you carry it off well, it will be just fine! You don't need a massively complex and story for your first VN, after all you're just starting off right?Depending on your choices, you can help Chikako get together with her childhood friend or break their friendship...forever. (maybe...)
(But of course if you want to, go ahead )
You don't need to have a tablet to make wonderful arts. I dont have a tablet either and I manage alright, but I guess it's easier to have a tablet. ^^>>> I'm tabletless...
Yes, but as Rewritten Enui said you can use free resourses or whatnot. Or you can just use your own art, the sprite you posted up doesn't look half bad
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Drawings >_< Well I'm going through an art block...and I'm terribad at drawing sexy bishies~ I'll try my best~
O: thank you~ I don't like using other people's work "free" work because somethings I know I could do myself. >_< Let's just see how this all turns out~
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