What Tenxinori said is right, you should place it in the Completed Games section, but oh well, I'll download this and try this. The background seems interesting though. I'll enjoy it x3
HanaMori wrote:What Tenxinori said is right, you should place it in the Completed Games section, but oh well, I'll download this and try this. The background seems interesting though. I'll enjoy it x3
Tenxinori wrote:Isn't this supposed to be in "completed games" section tho ;o *downloading* *_*
Oh! Its like, I need betareaders who can try it and give me feedback like wrong spellings or image problems and the like... After making changes (or maybe its good the way it is,) I'll post this on the completed games section. Thanks for downloading
HanaMori wrote:What Tenxinori said is right, you should place it in the Completed Games section, but oh well, I'll download this and try this. The background seems interesting though. I'll enjoy it x3
Tenxinori wrote:Isn't this supposed to be in "completed games" section tho ;o *downloading* *_*
Oh! Its like, I need betareaders who can try it and give me feedback like wrong spellings or image problems and the like... After making changes (or maybe its good the way it is,) I'll post this on the completed games section. Thanks for downloading
Wow that was awesome Q^Q great choice of words ;o;
Some sentences that you might need to fix o.o (The following is how I would fix it o-o)
Those black clouds roaming on the dark gray sky pouring out buckets of water.
The dark green grass moving along with it.
My cellphone weighted heavily in my pocket.
Tenxinori wrote:Wow that was awesome Q^Q great choice of words ;o;
Some sentences that you might need to fix o.o (The following is how I would fix it o-o)
Those black clouds roaming on the dark gray sky pouring out buckets of water.
The dark green grass moving along with it.
My cellphone weighted heavily in my pocket.
Uwaaah! Thanks a lot!~ I"ll make a note and fix it this weekend~~ Thank you so much~!<3
Tenxinori wrote:Wow that was awesome Q^Q great choice of words ;o;
Some sentences that you might need to fix o.o (The following is how I would fix it o-o)
Those black clouds roaming on the dark gray sky pouring out buckets of water.
The dark green grass moving along with it.
My cellphone weighted heavily in my pocket.
Uwaaah! Thanks a lot!~ I"ll make a note and fix it this weekend~~ Thank you so much~!<3
Tenxinori wrote:Wow that was awesome Q^Q great choice of words ;o;
Some sentences that you might need to fix o.o (The following is how I would fix it o-o)
Those black clouds roaming on the dark gray sky pouring out buckets of water.
The dark green grass moving along with it.
My cellphone weighted heavily in my pocket.
Uwaaah! Thanks a lot!~ I"ll make a note and fix it this weekend~~ Thank you so much~!<3
np :'D btw is it true story?
Nah. ^^" does it feel like one?
Though i got the idea from an accident where a high school student got struck by lightning while texting under a tree during a storm... ^^"
Thank you so much! I've done all the changes (and a little bit more)
I also put your profile link in the credits. Happy holidays~ (Yes, I had to wait for school to end before i could touch this again... T^T)
Its like, I need betareaders who can try it and give me feedback like wrong spellings or image problems and the like... 
After making changes (or maybe its good the way it is,) I'll post this on the completed games section. 
Thanks for downloading 
Thanks a lot!~ I"ll make a note and fix it this weekend~~ 