Plot:
A visual novel thriller, Apple of My Eye is a modern day gothic version of Snow White. When Snow Pomme is transported into the classic fairy tale, she quickly notices that each person resembles someone she knows in real life...and she begins to wonder if she will ever find her way out of this strange new place. The player will have to make several crucial decisions which ultimately decide Snow's fate...will something bad happen to her, or will she find her happy ending?
Characters:
Snow White-Snow Pomme The main character: Snow is a sweet but naive 16-year-old wishing for a brighter tomorrow. She's always longed for a life like those in the fairy-tales; little does she know she's about to get just that.
The Evil Queen-Felicity Pomme Felicity is Snow's cold and artificial new stepmother, who Snow suspects of marrying her father for reasons other than true love... In the alternate reality, she plays the role of the evil queen.
The Prince-Dean (love interest) Snow has known Dean ever since they were kids in grammar school. Kind and wonderful and perfect in every way...can he ever see plain old Snow as more than just his childhood friend? Perhaps now he can - for he appears as the prince himself in this alternate reality.
The Huntsman-Vincent (love interest) Vincent, or 'V' - as Snow often calls him - lives on a farm across the street. After learning that her favorite fruit is apples, he makes sure to bring a basket by for Snow every week. In the alternate reality V plays the role of the huntsman.
'The Dwarfs'-Lily, Luke (love interest), and Louis (love interest) Lily, Luke, and Louis are Snow's best friends at school - as well as fraternal triplets. Lily is bubbly and happy, Luke is more timid and bashful, and Louis is mischievous - as well often times a bit...well...grumpy They take on the role of the 'dwarfs' in Snow's alternate reality.
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Woah,just from reading the summary I can tell this is going to be an intense story.Oh and snow white is my favourite fairy tale story so that's a good addition =)!
I'm very intrigued as to how this is going to turn out *o*,so I shall be keeping an eye on it if you don't mind .
PockieHoshi wrote:Woah,just from reading the summary I can tell this is going to be an intense story.Oh and snow white is my favourite fairy tale story so that's a good addition =)!
I'm very intrigued as to how this is going to turn out *o*,so I shall be keeping an eye on it if you don't mind .
Of course I don't mind! I'm glad to have someone intrigued :3
Marcelo_Orlando wrote:Oh nice, looks promising, I'll check back to see how it's going.
It'll probably take quite some time because I have taken on way too many projects at once T.T But it will definitely happen!! Slowly but surely... haha
This sounds amazing I love these old classical stories with modern twists
-also Sarah Pomme
nice touch with that, I actually laughed out loud for a while.
Weakjounin wrote:This sounds amazing I love these old classical stories with modern twists
-also Sarah Pomme
nice touch with that, I actually laughed out loud for a while.
I love stories like that too (obviously)!! Haha, and thanks XD My one semester in french class finally pays off
I've decided to take this off the shelf and start working on it again! ^.^ It ought to be shorter than A Tale of Tails, so I'm thinking about making it my first visual novel. For those of you who care; be looking for sprites and stuff soon ;P
They take on the role of the 'dwarfs' in Snow's alternate reality. 
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I'm glad to have someone intrigued :3
