Lolita's art! Critiques welcome~

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Re: Lolita's art! Critiques welcome~

#16 Post by Snow Blossom »

Lolita_Soft wrote:Same pic, different styles of coloring XP
Whoot, it's Allen~ :)
I prefer the second one though; the shading seems more subtle, while the contrast isn't lost.

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#17 Post by Lolita_Soft »

Long time no post, I've got quite a few pics built up ^_^;;
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Tendershipping <3 I can't tell if I like how this came out or absolutely hate it...
Tendershipping <3 I can't tell if I like how this came out or absolutely hate it...
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A page of my BL comic "Strange"
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HOLY CRAP BOOBS. O_o Art trade with a friend...
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Oc for a potential story...
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Quick doodle, but I like it.
There is so much wrong with this...I was experimenting with the marker tool in SAI.
There is so much wrong with this...I was experimenting with the marker tool in SAI.
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Cover for a comic I havn't decided if I want to start.
Thank you page for my BL comic &quot;Strange&quot;. Too lazy to color DX
Thank you page for my BL comic "Strange". Too lazy to color DX
A thank you page for my BL comic &quot;Strange&quot;.
A thank you page for my BL comic "Strange".
My newest, and current favourite peice. A little SuckerPunch fanart~ for once, i acctualy like the background.
My newest, and current favourite peice. A little SuckerPunch fanart~ for once, i acctualy like the background.
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Re: Lolita's art! Critiques welcome~

#18 Post by 15385bic »

I like your colouring =D
prefer the softshade ones more

and agree with - ur last pic looks the best
keep it up

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#19 Post by LVUER »

I like your drawing... but I don't know why, but I don't really like how you draw the mouth (perhaps because they're all angled in strange way?) It's not that bad (and perhaps it's your art style), I just feel uncomfortable looking at the mouth.
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#20 Post by Lolita_Soft »

LVUER wrote:I like your drawing... but I don't know why, but I don't really like how you draw the mouth (perhaps because they're all angled in strange way?) It's not that bad (and perhaps it's your art style), I just feel uncomfortable looking at the mouth.
Hmmm, I've never noticed that befor (maybe becuase I'm used to drawing it like that?) Maybe I should work on makeing the mouths look more natural.
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#21 Post by LVUER »

Well, if you want that as your art style, it's up to you to change it or not. Though it doesn't hurt to practice and able to draw normal/natural looking mouth.
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#22 Post by Snow Blossom »

I like the way you shade the clothes *A*

For the first pic (tendershipping?), the white-haired guy/girl's (can't tell, sorry >3<) nose is kind of long, but the hair is great ^^

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#23 Post by Lolita_Soft »

I have a habit of disapearing :I
I'm back now, have some more art!
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A self portrate.... but prettier XD;;
A self portrate.... but prettier XD;;
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Practice drawing clothes
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#24 Post by Cidz »

Wow, those are awesome. You've improved greatly since you first made this thread. Keep up the work. I really like your coloring as well so pretty <3
i like the broken doll too with the stuffed bears its an interesting concept.

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#25 Post by JustAnotherMe »

I... I must try to learn from you! I especially must learn to color hair!!! Those strands of hair!! >=< Your coloring is sooo goooodddd!!!! TAT
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