Missed the disclaimer at the start of that advice, eh? ::points down at added emphasis::Green Skies wrote:I know this is completely going against rabbit's advice but:
The suit is better, but his shirt collar still has too much space between it and his neck. His hair is too shiny now, and makes no sense. The wide band of highlights (which is using too much white - remember?) and the very dark top of the hair and lower hair actually makes his hair look very flat. You've got too much contrast in the hair now, in other words.LateWhiteRabbit wrote: While you're learning its cool to show unfinished pieces and what not for feedback,
Skin looks much better, and the head is in a better ratio with the body.
You still need to use line weights like I and Deji have been saying, though.